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for Beast's Mate

by DecadenceRefined

person ergo
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Love the display of the primitive dominance. Half-breed, you say? Inuyasha's influence, perhaps?
person Fern
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I love this story. Can't wait for an update.
person Niya
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I have a thing for demon fics like this one. The back and forth with who's eyes your seeing the story in is nice and the fact that you get a nice bit of were they are befor you go into how they met was nice. I am not geting a good pic in my head of just what the werewolves look like but that is the only real down side to it. But some times less is more when doing demon fics on were every little thing is on them ^-^ lets a mind wonder ya know.
person conncoll
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey...sorry you havent been gettin reviews...im really intrigued and excited by this backstory...more soon please!!!
person doloris
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Continue to write more. Please update soooon!!
person K.M.
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I agree. I have been kinda lacking in reviews lately. Here goes nothing.(I hope I get TWO chapters for this)

WOW!!!!!! Okay to be honest you have me in circles. Who is the other one that they mentioned and when do I meet him? And the thing about the sound she makes.....? Is that like whoever arouses her the most gets her? Or are they still going to figh for her? Besides those questions great chapter. Hope you update soon and keep more coming:)

P.S. what a pun that was!:)
person crushed_rose
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*growl and pout* I hate when you do that...just end it right before something is about to happen....and I can't read more because there is no more. please update...PLEASE UPDATE!!
person moonbeam
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. you do need a bata for some....but i still love it..a howl for you
person kimmie
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo this is getting really interesting
but i really wish the chapter were a bit lenthier but i really appreciate you updating so often
a little sad that we didn't get to meet the 3rd person she will have to spend time with though according to the council
update soon
person vittoria
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this chapter an find it interesting, knowing how they got together!!! but will you eventually revert back to the first few chapters which let up in the aution house??? this storyline is just a bit confusing for me at the mo... but i love it, i just think myron is the ultimate alpha male, i'd have one of him anyday!!!!!