rate_review Reviews

I absolutely hate that Byron got to take her!

O "f" all them...this story is amazing...the chapter length is perfect (people are just greedy) I so far have found no errors worth batting an eye at (no one's perfect anyways)...if you can't understand the POV you're just an idiot. And whatever else people were complaining about. You are doing a great job, so when people make those lame ass comments just know it's only becuase they couldn't write a story this good if they tried. :) Can't WAIT for you next chapter!

i loved it, you are a great writer and i didnt see anything bad...so dont worry!

hey i love your story very much and maybe thats why i think some of the chapters are to short! the truth is that they do seem to be getting longer but you add so much detail in so little writting that it leaves us wondering what is going on! Sometimes i get confused and i have to reread the chapters but i still absolutely love your story very much! i really love both characters their so unique in their own way which makes this story difrrent in a good way! i know some people do not like to hear criticism but some of it can be helpful, i hope you update really soon i love this story and can not wait to find out what happens!!! update soon please!

complaints? why? what? are you people insane???
keep it up you make my days when you update.
and the switching of points of views is nice. i enjoy it.
perhaps many people dont understand that most stories written in that way are published today.
so bah to you people
no more flaming
grow up

Don't worry about it. If people take the time to point out errors it means they like your fic. I find it original and I greatly enjoy it. I hate that Delancy has to spend time with Byron and Falon but I suppose it's necessary. I hope to see Delancy and Myron falling in love with each other. Please don't make the mistake of having Delancy saying "I love you" out of nowhere; try and make it believable. I love your frequent updates and I hope you keep them coming!

whoo doggie.thats some story youve got there!Bravo!

ooooowwww poor little author, I'll make it all better! I love this fic, its really quite good, could use some minor changes, but as it is it is still really great!

I luv this story. Keep going please!

Sorry, but I just can't get into Byron. I know she's going to end up with Myron but the more time she spends with Byron, the more it makes me hate his character. The story is very good though.