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Oh screw them. Your story is great. I love it!

You are doing just fine. My only critism is that your chapters are short, but I would prefer short chapters and frequent updates. Your writingis good and will get better the more you do it. My only problem with you as an author is that you ask for reviews, you are bound to get more critism if you force reviews. You will enjoy your story more if you write it soley for your own pleasure and in the end it will be a better story. I hope you continue to write and update. I will look forward to the next chapter.
'Nes

I dont see anything to criticize it is a very deep story maybe a bit of a challenge for some to understand but I get the plot perfectly, the details are lovel you can almost envision each person and it keep you excited ont he edge for more. Keep up the good work.

i LOVE your story!!! I check everyday to see if you updated! I know I have WAY too much time on my hands lol But it really is good! Don't let bad reviews put you down! you should be proud of it cuz it kicks ass! :D Looking forward to the next!

Sorry for not reviewing..I just lurk but I will start post more reviews in the near future. ;)

wow, the plot thickens! Please keep the chapters rolling, i want to know what happens. Kudos!

Its wonderful please write more :D your doing really well..

Hey! there's no need to be sad, never!! I mean what is so hard to understand that the actions and facts in chpaters 5 to 10 are a flashback?! oohh...sorry I guess for those who can only read and not think, you'd have to write at the beginning of chapter 5 "flashback people!!!". It's crazy! anyway you have my support in this matter, and don't be discouraged by those who don't know that the "thing" that occupies their heads can also be used at thinking!
Sorry if I have offended anybody! (okay, I'm not sorry, but anyways...:D)
BYE-BYE!!

PS: I L-O-V-E your fic! kisses!

read the novel blood and chocolate by Annette Curtis Klause. and they have the movie coming out the 26th of this mounth.

Well, I'm not complaining... :)

Although I am wondering where the auction scene went... Good job so far!