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Ho-leee-shhhiiiiieeaaatttt I got trhough this whole story in one day and what can I say I was and still is amazed. Good work and Iya don't see many titty fuck scenes aorund here and a superb job done well on it. Im wondering...you gonna do any anal in the future maybe? The chapters of how everythign begna and put together is really nice dude. Can't wait for more to read though. Its kinda comical when Myron Bryon and Falon have their names rhymed and everything kinda funny there lol.
I'll be back to see what you got cooked up until then later dude.

Awesome story and you have to continue because I want to read this story to the end. It's actually really interesting and I can't wait to see where you take the story. UPDATE fast please!

you have a nice pace going with the story but i just wish you update more.lol
i can honestly say that there is not a moment in each chapter where its boring. theres always something for the reader to think aobut or look at and picture. each character is not completely opposite and they arent similar either. in my opinionl,thats hard to do. keep up the good work. i love reading your fiction.
meadow

i love this story
the whole dominating forces thing is very sexy
i also apreciate how speedy you are in updating
its amazing
keep it up

xoxo
dru

So I'm thinking they were testing to see which of them could get a greater reaction out of her.. inner beast?

aww don't be sad, still lovin the story and this really was a great chapter, you are sure to get many reviews. Really great! So you better update soon!!!

OMG OMG write more please Please please

I know this isn't much of a review, but I'd just like to say that your story is just...kick-ass, for the lack of anything else coming to mind. Even if people critique you, I really, REALLY hope that you post the next chapter up soon. This storyline really has my interest...and thats a rare thing, m'dear. So please don't feel discouraged by other people's criticism. Buh-bye now.

awesome, wonderful, bravo!!
this just keeps getting better and better the further i read on. who says your stuff needs work?? its fine to me. very good chapter might i add. byron is kinda cool but i still like myron. falon is just creepy. i wanna learn more about his personality but im not sure if that would be a good idea.hehe all these gorgeous men, what is a girl to do..
and if it is at all possible, could you try and explain alittle more about the Weres. although i love the mystery about it, i still wanna know whats going on.lol
Im glad that you have a rational story.unlike other stories where they make characters feel a certain way b/c the want to either speed it up or just want them to go that way. the story seems very real and i love what youve done with everything. good job. keep the updates coming. im enjoying this alot!!
i love your writing style by the way.
meadow

Hon, I don't understand why you would be reciving so many bad reviews! You have a lovely story going here, and the characters you have created are one of a kind (and very sexy if I say so my self ;) And, don't let bad reviews get to you,it's what you want to do not what others want! I hope that no matter what you finish this fic, cause I know theres plenty of people who want more!!!