rate_review Reviews

...I love you and your amazing story, m'dear. <3

so um yeah can there be like a chapter where byron and myron fight and then they're all bloody and she like nurses them back to health?
lol the idea of two adonises fighting is just sexy.

wonderful chapter.
yay
dru

hey great sory im soo excited about what is going to happen next because well u made me curious the way Bryon (i think thats his name) acted in the last chapter (11) i like his character i mean at first hes arrogant and cocky but when he's alone with the female he seems so much sweeter then when he's with the other company of the Were and im still confused about why did they licked her neck ohh and i want to see whats the females reaction to the other Werewolf licking her neck not Bryon or Myron i think its Falcon yeah thats him i wanna see the reaction of the woman to his licking ohh yeah i wanna ask u a fovor could u please make the chpaters longer not over excessivly but yeah so thanks Cant Wait Till You Update Again !!!!! :)

@1: wow. Some hot smash story here. ooey gooey good.

IT is getting very interesting!!!!!!!! I like that we did get to here Byron side of things and wha the is really feeling. I feel bad for Myron though because he had to give her up and I know that in the end he gets her but it must make it hard for him watching her go to other males!

Go You!!! wonderful scene i have to say. Im just really antsy about what is to come..who's at the den now!?! I dont know but i want to find out.
im glad Delancy realized that she was wrong in trying to leave. Byron really is nice. and he has a big heart for such a violent creature. almost makes you wanna cry *sniff sniff*. BUT, this is a myron and delancy story! Hopefully hell have someone. right?
meadow

WOW, some heated moments. Interesting that deep below the beast is the real man. WooHoo!

Well once again you have managed to turn out a GREAT chapter.
I love how you are able to make us (or maybe just me) feel for the characters and and find sympathy for them.
I love byron I don't know why, but he is the one I want her to end up with all though I know she ends up with byron... O well I a girl can dream.

well I'll check back later for another chapter

later
strangerdanger89

I think breast sex is underrated too. Nice chapter, good descriptions.

Hmm, good work but I'm wondering about something. Wolves do take a single mate to be with in their lives, but more often than not, they'll screw others. So, because of that, the alphas of the pack would be able to get with anyone they wanted.