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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.... just wow.... that was an excellent chapter
i loved the little voyeur scene and i love your descriptions of eyes and expressions
awwwww i'm starting to like byron more ...OH NO
i always fall for the underdog that i know isn't going to get the girl
the makeout scene was really hot and intense and passionate
but i'm sad because i'm dreading that byron is gonna get hurt when delancy chooses myron
boooooo
please please update soon
i loved the little voyeur scene and i love your descriptions of eyes and expressions
awwwww i'm starting to like byron more ...OH NO
i always fall for the underdog that i know isn't going to get the girl
the makeout scene was really hot and intense and passionate
but i'm sad because i'm dreading that byron is gonna get hurt when delancy chooses myron
boooooo
please please update soon
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story just read the whole thing today couldn't stop... Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Write more, quick. Please?
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey just a thought but maybe you could make this story in to a series or some thing....do spin off stories about bryon and falon....i would really love to see them get their own mates....i really love this story.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay
hott and sexy
w00t
yay
hott and sexy
w00t
yay
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is HOT! though I'll tell ya this is one long flashback ;) It's good though, it helps us try to figure out why the hell she chose Myron over sweetheart Byron. Unless he turns into a real prick, I can't really see why she chose Myron...Meanders a fucktard. Just thought it needed to be said. Please write more, I typically don't read originals but this is too good to pass up!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please keep the updates coming. The story is great. I have been reading it and just can't get enough from whats already up. I need to know what happens next. Whom just walked in?????
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want more. This is amazing. I love your story line. The characters are great. Don't let anyone tell you that this isn't amazing.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-laughs- Write more please
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great story you have going, but after reading over the first few chapters again, I think you might need to rework them a little bit to fit in some of the later stuff.
Other than that and a few grammatical errors, good job!
Other than that and a few grammatical errors, good job!