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hurry up and update i can't wait for the next chapter

oh no you havent stopped have you?!

I LOVE IT! LOVE IT! PLEASE KEEP GOING! PLEASE! UPDATE! UPDATE! WHOOHOO!

omg! that chapter made me so horny! please keep going with the good stuff! yeah! yummy yummy stuff!

wow this is getting better than i expected. i am way more interested now so you can't quit. more more more

heres your loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong review.
Now update!
Screw what people say about your story writing, its absolutely fine!
NOW UPDATE BEFORE I LICK... I mean... com-mplain.

Okay, so...I love this story. I've been totally sucked in from the very beginning. And I'm going to stop being an awful person who reads and doesn't review...I know..I'm a jerk. >=( But, I'm done being a jerk. You're writing is good, and you've made a pretty complex lifestyle (that of the werewolves) pretty easy to follow. Definite kudos. What's a little interesting is that all of the sudden I'm like "aww...Byron..." but Myron is the main guy and I know he's gonna end up with her (seeing as this is a flashback...) but I'm super interested to see where this goes! Can't wait for your next update!

-Fern

Hey I just started reading your story.. hmm I was confused.. Your story starts off in the future compaired to your summary.. I mean its talking about the last couple chapters.. and we all obvioulsy know who she ends up with. and I love that she ends up with him.. its just.. well you should change the summary.

The twist with haveing the once hated male werewolf bonding some what with your leading lady was a little off setting but it dose fit with wolves. By that I mean a wolf would natraly hate another male wolf when a female is around but would want to stay in the faver of said female so him being more kind is not so hard to take in I guess. I do want to see were this leads the two males when the other finds out about the whole murderer swiching thing. Sorry about spelling but I am not spell checking for such a review.

I'm confused! I check his website almost everyday to see if the story has been updated. When it says it has been updated (the story has moved to the top) I check to see the new chapter and it hasn't been updated. I also noticed that with other stories as well. Does anyone know what the hell is going on. It's really annoying when you get excited and then find out no that the story hasn't been updated, you know?

As for the story, I love where it is going. I feel Byron covering for his brother isn't really protecting him at all. So hopefully, that is what he will learn from her. That sometimes protecting the person you love can in the end hurt them. Byron mentions that he knows Delancy is Myron's mate. So I think we have that covered. We know the end up together. What I don't understand is about he marking. I thought he would have marked her has his mate, but when he was taking her home from the auction, he states he is so angry he could mark her? I don't understand, do you mean just a sexual mark or a mating mark?

And thank you for not making Delancy into a typical romance girl who starts to scream, cry, faint and in the end doesn't think about the situation really. Or how to work through and how it can benefit her.

Well anyway, like I said before, this story is a great set up for sequels. SOOOOO UPDATE PLEASE!!!!