rate_review Reviews

I just wanted to say that this is one of the best stories that I have read so far on adultfanfiction. I hope you stay motivated and inspired enough to complete this story ^-^! Would you by chance be contemplating some stand-alone pieces for Byron and Falon?.. I think it'd be the greatest thing ever if they were to have their own little stories..featuring their own found mates. Keep up the wonderful writing!!

Oh dear - what a scene - I love that she has to stay with each candidate for 3 weeks......

I love this story please hurry and continue i want to keep reading!

Come on you have to update-you have put so much work into this you can't stop now. The story is too developed!

Hey there! It's me again. ^.~ I'm caught up with the story, and it looks like things have taken an interesting turn. I wouldn't have guessed that Byron has a softer side, but I like that you introduce it slowly, by dropping hints, first showing his solitary home, then the escape attempt and the explanation of his history. That was intriguing. I wonder if we've just slyly been introduced to the real villain, Meander? ^.~ Good scene, it is indeed underrated, and I'm curious about the name Byron uses for Myron, "half-breed." Maybe we'll learn more about that later. And the Gift and Delancy's heritage. You're keeping us guessing. I like that. I wonder if, when she returns to Myron, she might have doubts that he's using her to get to the top? After all, she did just meet him and every man thinks he's a king, right? ^.~ You're doing great, girl, and remember, I critique because I care, lol. In the end, though, they're just suggestions, and you have to write as you think best. Love it so far and looking forward to the next ch! ^-^

Where is the next chapter? This is such a good story, please don't get discouraged and drop it.

Pleeeeease update soon! I love this story!!!! :)

Oh my god the suspense is killing me please update soon

wow! this is the best fic ive ever read! please keep writing, ya have a great talant! your really good at lemons! love 'em!

Love your story. Update soon. Why did Byron get the first two weeks?