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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I think the twist for the vamps was good. I mean its only right to have vamps I mean that was the perfect time to bring them in.
If anyone doesn't like them then stop reading it I say.
If anyone doesn't like them then stop reading it I say.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good. i liked it but try to stay true to the story don't just take the characters and run away with them. im n0t saying y0u did but try t0 be aware 0f that. i l0ved it and please keep the st0ries c0ming y0u have a real talent.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
About time u updated! Now we just need to continue a nice steady pace of u writing and us reading. You have a great story going, i really want more to read
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting, I am curious to see where you are taking this. Thank you for the quick update, keep it coming.
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Talk about one heck of a stressed induced trip to the twilight zone. Poor girl. I'ts very abstract, but if the next chapter starts to clean up some of the images she has then not too bad.
Great chapter otherwise. She decided to laugh instead of crack up, always a great choice.
Great chapter otherwise. She decided to laugh instead of crack up, always a great choice.
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG please continue. My god two chapters in two days. COOL. Love the new twist in the plot. Keep it coming.
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good but what about the werewolfs?
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I missed you. I know what it is like with the stress of studies and midterms. I think your post was brilliant. I am still waiting for her reunion with Myron. However, this new character seems interesting. I am intrigued. Well, I wish you the best of luc with your studies. Have a great night! Bye-bye.
Anita
Anita
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT DOG!!!! (no pun intended) Your back and this current chapter is great. She's finally fed up with they way they are treating her, about time. And with the she-wolf in her head helping her along, she is coming into her own very well.
3 parts werewolf, 1 part Vampire to one part ticked off GIFT, she's in for another trip down the rabbit hole and I don't think she is going to go quietly.
Keep up the great work, so glad you are back.
3 parts werewolf, 1 part Vampire to one part ticked off GIFT, she's in for another trip down the rabbit hole and I don't think she is going to go quietly.
Keep up the great work, so glad you are back.
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope he turns out to be a hot vamp.