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for Beast's Mate

by DecadenceRefined

person KayLove
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man o man, these cliffhangers are going to be the death of me. Who in the world is in her bed?@!?!@?! You have to continue.. and Myron better hurry up with the sexy back.. i miss him.
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story today and I think it is very well written! I love Myron, but Byrons pretty cute, too. Then theirs all the vampires, and their hot too. AHH, too many hot guys to fantasize about! You were complaining about not having very many reviews, so I thought I would give you a little encouragement. So update soon?
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE. OMG MORE.

This is getting better and better by the chapter. PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE.
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! Just have to add more hate and discontent to her life. Myron is just going to LOVE the situation his mate is in now. I really do enjoy this entire flash back. It's great to know the history of a pair before the storie continues

Love it Love it Love it
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Job,
I am so happy that Myron is back. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Thanks. Have a great day.
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And our plot thickens even more. I love this change from the Werewolves to the Vampires. It' keeps us from becoming disinterested in the story line. I can see that Werewolves and Vampires are strongly connected. We just need to keep reading and see what you have up your sleeves.

Both sides need her for different reasons, and yet she's taking all of this very well for a Mortal woman with some kind of a special gift. LOL.

Keep us going... PLEASE
person IluvLA
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u need to get bacc to the whole werewolf thing... i liked it a lot better(just constructive criticism). u still got a great story goin tho. plz plz plz continue soon
person KAP
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! thank you for the speedy updates.
person KAP
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting update, I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't have a problem with the Vampires, we just discovered they and the Werewolves are of the same blood. This just thickens the plot with more and more interesting plots. She must be a very important symbol for not just the Werewolves but Vampires.

Please keep writing, this is just starting to get very good.