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For the love of the gods. Please UPDATE SOON. I am going through withdrawl of this story.

Ah 'dahlin', that's a nice story you got here. WRITE MORE SEX and more people will review ;) And come to think about it... you have a lot of reviews already..........

more!!! i want more!!! its an excellent story.. did i mention u need more?

omgsh, hurry scurry!
i just want more myron!
>.<

haha.


this is a great story so far.
i really can't wait for more!

OMG I have been trying to review for ever, but something was wrong and I couldn't log in. Finally!! OK this review will go back some.

Firstly, I'm glad Delancy isn't just excepting everything that's going around her. She question everything and demands everyone speak to her and not just about her. I was also glad to see her trying to excape when she was first put with Byron. I couldn't believe Myron took her back - and then she had to spend time with Falon!! I was very surpise she made connection with them both and, although she didn't have sex with them, she did do something with each one, wow. I have to say, it kind of felt like she betrayed Myron a little. But that inner wolf of hers start to take over and she out of control.

Now enter the vampires. Delancy had the best reaction for someone in her situation. I like the whole vampire/werewolf war story. Enfer is a dangerous vampire, but even worse is Gladstrom. Here's a thought if having a mate is a weakness and a vampire can be killed though their mate. Then couldn't Gladstrom be killed through his mate? Also, I'm not into M/M or even F/F - strictly M/F, but it was expected. I did read it, but since I don't read much M/M (only when it's in stories like this) I can only say is seem well written.

The big shocker was - SHE IS A VIRGIN!! I really didn't expect that. I know she ends up with Myron - the beginning of the whole story tells us that, but while reading each chapter it's just easy to forget. I think she is much better off with Myron to. For one thing vampires can have more than one mate, werewolves mate for life. As for being with Myron and not with Byron or Falon. Well, he saw her first and they made a connection, that's only fair.

Please update soon, just because she ends up with Myron doesn't mean no one else has her first.

Yes i too agree with "feathers" here .... the story is not as effective as it could be because in the end we know who delancy is going to end up with. i personally do love all the character and the possible pairings but its sad that i know those pairing are not going to work.

At last, once again you give us another chapter and what a good chapter it was. No prob with the M/M, it was expected eventually. I love the current change in the Vampirers, and the interesting change in the werewolves.

How I love this new change of heart with the werewolves, now they don't even fight that Myron has declaired her as his mate, but I'm sure the other two do as well. Goodie Goodie Goodie Goodie

Please put up another chapter and make my weekend!!!! Please, Please, Please, Please

Please keep going. Please. This story's getting better by the chapter.

OMG!! LMAO wow wasn't expecting that to happen at all. By the way Myron ( i think thats how it spelled) sounds so damn hot with that accent I was all like OMG! Can I have him... please... pretty please. lol. Your doing a GREAT job just so you know.

awww we love you too and of course you're worth it lol, good chappie tho really, you did very well with the m/m scene. Can't wait till you update!!!