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i mean the vampire was good...but i just liked myron alot more i think maybe because u started the story with him is why some ppll are hooked on him. hope u update soon.

i mean the vampire was good...but i just liked myron alot more i think maybe because u started the story with him is why some ppll are hooked on him. hope u update soon.

Hi there, I am a writer on another site, and I totally understand the need for reviews. It is so hard to write without feedback and knowing people are reading and enjoying. I personally an enamored with ther werewolves, and can hardly wait until they come into play again. I love the vampires too, but the werewolves are extremely sexy. Good luck and I look foward to your next update.

Omg all of it. I love you twists and turns in the plot. Keep it up.

so whats gunna happen 2 myron..but i still like the story..

What and fine mess she has gotten herself into. Run from Werewolves end up with Vampires. Run from Vampires and be hunted by Werewolves. Everyone is talking about her, no one is talking to her. Poor girl.

So if I understand all this now we have a Blood Queen and a Femorine both housed inside of Delancy, both guiding and advising as she get's into a new situation. Why do I feel that both are the same woman, but different stages of life and place residence?

Can we have more history and background on the Blood Queen and Femorine. Everything is so sparce and vague. They are voices in Delancy's head, but we know very little of them except from what the men will say. Is there not one woman who can tell her more?

Please keep writing, this is a wonderful story.

Raw! Intense! Primal! Erotic!

Just the way I like 'em! So much enjoying the two different perspectives.

So, how's the good girl in you doing now?

Oh and the poems cute.

Update soon please.

that was really good and i hope that you will update soon!

Fantastic! what a great chapter and I love how things are going. Delancy should start to get real pissy very soon. Give em hell honey!!!!!