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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I just read the other reviews and I have to agree that Lain Iwakura gives you a very good example of a review; and I agree with every word she said. Everything she said are things I have thought about during this story about the characters and the storyline.
Something that I would like to add is the location of the events. To set them in the Louisiana bayou is wonderful. It fits. Especially with the werewolves. I could see them living there when they gather. Having the Vamps there reminds me of Ann Rice. Which is good.
Something that I would like to add is the location of the events. To set them in the Louisiana bayou is wonderful. It fits. Especially with the werewolves. I could see them living there when they gather. Having the Vamps there reminds me of Ann Rice. Which is good.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a Chapter you have given us to read. I LOVE IT
So you want to know who to do side stories of... I would love to see stories of the Blood Queen and the Femorine themselves. These ladies are the the true form of wisdom and yet we have very little knowledge of them.
Who are these two very important women who have taken up residence in Delancy's head. We have a glimps of what importants they are, but nothing else.
Enfer, what a very interesting Vampire, can we have more on who he was before he was this cold and frightening Vampire. I smell a deep and heart wrenching story for this poor man. In many ways, he's not one but two people living in the same person.
You have baited us with hints of the fact that the Vampires and Werewolves are of the same race. Why not expand on this story. After all Delancy is becoming the most important keystone to both races. IS the Blood Queen & the Femorine the same woman?
This current chapter was truly amazing, the 4 men battling for the virginity of one woman who at this time just wants a little sanity in her life. She's been used, abused, pampered, and petrified with every turn of her head. The poor woman must feel as if she is Eve in "All About Eve". This game of chess that the Werewolves and Vampires are playing leave Delancy as the Queen , but they use her as a lowly pawn.
How can Werewolves not be magical, you can't just change shape and not expect it to have the assistance of maigic. Not strong magic but magic none the less. Just Enfers' magic was more visiual. But you still have not proven to us that Magic and Werewolves are not compatable. We are mearly assuming the werewolves are incapable of magic.
So you want to know who to do side stories of... I would love to see stories of the Blood Queen and the Femorine themselves. These ladies are the the true form of wisdom and yet we have very little knowledge of them.
Who are these two very important women who have taken up residence in Delancy's head. We have a glimps of what importants they are, but nothing else.
Enfer, what a very interesting Vampire, can we have more on who he was before he was this cold and frightening Vampire. I smell a deep and heart wrenching story for this poor man. In many ways, he's not one but two people living in the same person.
You have baited us with hints of the fact that the Vampires and Werewolves are of the same race. Why not expand on this story. After all Delancy is becoming the most important keystone to both races. IS the Blood Queen & the Femorine the same woman?
This current chapter was truly amazing, the 4 men battling for the virginity of one woman who at this time just wants a little sanity in her life. She's been used, abused, pampered, and petrified with every turn of her head. The poor woman must feel as if she is Eve in "All About Eve". This game of chess that the Werewolves and Vampires are playing leave Delancy as the Queen , but they use her as a lowly pawn.
How can Werewolves not be magical, you can't just change shape and not expect it to have the assistance of maigic. Not strong magic but magic none the less. Just Enfers' magic was more visiual. But you still have not proven to us that Magic and Werewolves are not compatable. We are mearly assuming the werewolves are incapable of magic.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was very intense! I would love to see a side story about Enfer.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG NO. you killed one of them. I should say that bastard killed one of them.
But omg two chapters. ooooo and they were great.
The story is coming along great. everytime i see there is an update i know i am in for a treat.
keep it up and more updates please.
my vote. course our female lead and the vamp.
But omg two chapters. ooooo and they were great.
The story is coming along great. everytime i see there is an update i know i am in for a treat.
keep it up and more updates please.
my vote. course our female lead and the vamp.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's not fair!!! you did'nt even say which werewolve was dead...you can't the leave the chapter like that without telling who's DEAD!!!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg who was the one who died?
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HYE~! OMG. NO. I think that D (My nickname for her) she be with Myron no matter what! This vampire business is getting on my nerves. I think that maybe you should have D have a recarnation on her or something so that The vampire can be happy without her! Man. Sorry. Keep the story up!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....suspense! Ah, I love it. It's just a constant wondering if Delancy is going to stay with Enfer or if she'll go back to Myron. I really really love how you are portraying the vampires. Giving them feelings and goals and everything, it's just awesome.
I'd have to say that I love Warren and Byron. Byron seems to be the misunderstood type of guy, accused of an awful deed because he was protecting his family...while trying to find love possibly? I don't know, I just know that I like him a lot. Having a side story about him would be lovely.
Warren is just...adorable? Yeah, that's a good word to use. He kind of befriended Delancy and I love how he's gay. I just have a thing for gay characters.
Keep up the beautiful work, hun, the story is taking a lovely turn and I keep checking for updates on what's going to happen next.
I'd have to say that I love Warren and Byron. Byron seems to be the misunderstood type of guy, accused of an awful deed because he was protecting his family...while trying to find love possibly? I don't know, I just know that I like him a lot. Having a side story about him would be lovely.
Warren is just...adorable? Yeah, that's a good word to use. He kind of befriended Delancy and I love how he's gay. I just have a thing for gay characters.
Keep up the beautiful work, hun, the story is taking a lovely turn and I keep checking for updates on what's going to happen next.
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooo you did a wonderful job on detailing the vampires i was actually begining to like this part of the story, i don't think that you brought Myron back at the right time though
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! I am so happy that Myron showed up. She belongs with Myron. I did like the beauty and mystery of the vampires, but she needs to be with him.I think that you did a wonderful job so far in creating this world, and I hope that there is a lot more in store for us. (*wink*) I cannot wait to read more. I hope that you have a wonderful day. Ta!