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I knew it! I just knew there was something special about both the blood Goddess and the She Wolf. Thank you for the history. This fills in so many holes and make the story even more interesting. To know more about the women with in Delaney really makes her more of a strong character. It's only since she came in contact with the Vampires that the Blood Queen made her play for power. And now we have Delaney with 2 aces up her sleeves and a big war just over the horizon.

If someone has the gall to criticize your writing maybe they should try it themselves. See how good you write when the story just pours out of you at 3 am and you can't help but write it. Even with a few extra people reading it for you, you won't catch all the little errors. I don't think there is much problem with your tenses, and missing a few words. This story has a strong base, it's well written and it keeps your readers attention.

Besides, if you were getting this published with a major publisher, you would go over your story again with a fine tooth comb to make sure everything was perfect. This is not going into the Library of Congress so that person should just back off. Fanfiction is entertainment, and allows Joe Public to write stories for all to enjoy.

I think this is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapters. Please keep writing.

I just wanted to say that I LOVE this story, one of the best Vamp/Were fics I've read in a very long time. I've been reading this since the beginning and just got an account so I can reveiw. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Ok. Myron is clearly lying through his teeth and majorly kissing that Glendstrom's ass in order to get Delancy back, but he's managed to piss her off at the same time. And I can't blame her for being pissed. So far, to her, Enfer is looking better all the time. He is at least standing by her side. Treating her like a person deserving of respect. Not like a piece of property. Heck, even Byron's looking better to her at this point. Shame on Myron.

I like the idea that Delancy can contact her inner spirits as well. They seem to like taking over her whenever it's convenient for them. It's about time she learned to return the favor. What else are they good for? Otherwise, I can see that it's going to be an interesting, and probably frustrating, 7 days.

LOL. I liked the analogy of heartache hangovers and alcohol hangovers. Been through the heartache ones and believe me, they are just as bad as the alcohol ones. Actually worse cause they last much longer.

Ohh, I love the new chapter! I can't wait until the next one! Hmmm... how to make this longer... Have you thought about making a story about Byron too? I really like him to, but I think that Enfer should be the next story because he has played such a big part in this story. I really like the interaction between the Blood Goddess and the Wolf Goddess. It will be interesting to see how things work out. Hmm... I guess that's all I have to say... Oh wait... is Delancy going to get laid soon? Poor girl. Ok, that's it.

WOW! I discovered your story last night and stayed up all day to read what you've got so far. I don't know who to feel for, Myron or Enfer, but they're both wonderful, and I think you should write about Enfer next time. He's just so sweet with his insecure jealousies. So far, my favorite part was when Delancey ran away from the werewolves and was spirited away to find out she was The Gift to the vamps. Awesome!!! You are very talented and I can't wait to see what comes next.

mrsmarcuscopernicus it seems yours is the first negative comment out of 508, have you even read the whole story? this story is so not amature its way better then some of the garbage here, read the entire story before reviewing.

Oh and DKat, The She-Wolf is Isabelle of the Pale Moon Pack you might have missed the passage where her name comes out

Superb chapter, i really loved this chapter i can't wait to see what Isabella has in store

ok ok i will try my hardest to make this an actual review for the story instead of ststing how much i love the story yada-yada...now why all of a sudden did you push myron to the back burner and put enfer in charge? not that im complaining, he is one gorgeous piece of vamp ass~damn...my nose started to bleed just thinking bout him. and couldnt byron have came or did he not know what myron was planning?

That rotten bastard. Calling her just a human bitch. Ooooo I wanna slap his handsome face that evil Myron. But of course we all know what will come in the end. But still the story before that is just so good.

I loved her come back, gotta admitt the last two chapters were rather short. Love the longer ones with more detail. Ooooo detail.

And god to have seen his face when she walked out with Efern on her arm. :D

Keep it up.

Way To Go Delancy!!!!! Just kick Myron and those stuck up vampires in the chops!!!!

She has every right to be pissed at Myron, just sitting there, however, she's not seeing that he's straining to stay in that chair (for some reason we do not know of just yet).

At last she has decided to be in-tune with both the Blood Goddess and the She Wolf. She can tap into the ladies and it's going to be a very interesting 7 days before the Goddess kicks a few vampires right where they need it most.

I love these last 2 chapters, we have discovered so much about the two Ladies in Delancy's head and yet I still want to know more. The hint on the Blood Goddess and the reactions of the older vampires makes my mouth water for more information. And just the pure determination of the She Wolf tells us that Myron is her mate, but once again I want to know more about the She Wolf.

Does she have a name, like the Blood Goddess does?
What is the history of both ladies?
Are both the goddesses close to the same age (as I'm guessing)?
Why are they both with Delancy?

Please keep writing, short chapters are great as long as the next chapter is just a short way away.

Thanks for keeping us glued to the edge of our keyboards.