rate_review Reviews

Finally got a chance to log in. Well, as usual Delancy is amazing, she with stands a lot and keep a straigt face doing it.

Sad and very unexcepted - FALON DIES!!! I really don't know who I would be OK with dying. I guess Falon and Byron were going to die anyway. I mean all 3 wolves were going to fight to the death for Delancy and we all know that she end's up with Myron. So that has to mean that Falon and Bryon dies, but I was still broken hearted.

Enfer, wow, he is turning out to be a better and hotter vampire than I first thought. And he is giving Delancy so much support and comfort, which is something she really needs. Something that, from her point of view, she was not getting from Myron. I know Myron was following orders to stay away from her, to let Bryon and Falon have their time with her. But to Delancy she was just abondon and betrayed. Now she has Enfer at her side and he is not stepping away from her for nothing.

As for the story in general. I think the addition of the vampires wasn't needed, the story was going good without the added charactors and it does make it a bit confusing at times. However, I like to finish a ride once I start it. Besides the addition didn't hurt the story, it just extened it and that only means more chapters to read. How great is that?

The side story, hmmmm, it would have to be Enfer. And one more thing... YES I would like faster updates more than correct grammer. So keep'em coming.

Mmm, you're more than welcome for the account reg, oh wonderful writer. ^.~

And, if you took my personal comments about the writing style as the flame you mentioned, it wasn't intended that way GODS no. I was trying to add some constructive criticism to my "Oh em gee I love you" fangirl-like post. >.< I'm sorry if I offended you!

I love it, keep it up!

Another awesomely well written chapter, to you flamers if your taking the time to over analyse every sentence and every word for grammar/spelling mistakes your either not enoying the story or are a troll so why don't you go be a grammar nazi on another story?

I love this story. And I really love the fact that you update often. I personally don't care if you have bad grammar, the plot is what's important. And I really hope that Enfer is who you are going to write a seperate story about.

ok i liked this story. notice that was past tense. the beginning had me hooked i liked how you talked about different aspects of their relationship. And the whole going into the past and showing us how they met yeah that was cool too......but it has gone on long enough. i stopped reading at chapter 17. i would come back to see if you updated but i could never find myself reading the chapters they bored me. It would be cool if we could wrap up the trip down memory lane and maybe look more into their future....just a thought from a old fan. i like werewolf stories i loved the story but not so much now. i just had to get that out because i rarely find a nice loooong story i get into.

That was so mean what that person said to you. It was so uncalled for. You have a lot more people on your side who think your story is excellent. I wouldn't let it get you down. Just keep the writing the chapters for those of us who love your story. Good Night! Can't wait to read the next chapter

I looooove the back story you added in this chapter it adds more layers to this already heavily layered and awesome novel

Okay. I truly hope you appreciate this, I registered an account expressly to comment on your novel here. I must say, I'm thoroughly enjoying this plot line. It's rare to find a good story that just isn't simply sex. This is more than that; it's got a sensible, legible plot line with a few juicy bits. It's truly what I seek in a good lemon, and I adore how you make every character singular in their own respect.
I think the different points of view are a tad confusing, I went through an entire chapter thinking it was the wrong person. I've also completely lost track of the difference between Myron and Byron, who's who, which one is which one...Needless to say, I've gotten to the point where I assume it's the same person and get myself very very confused. Regardless of all that, you've left me hanging for more chapters where I keep coming back to check about 4 times a day if you've posted a new chapter.
I'll admit it, I'm a horny little lady at heart, really. But then again, aren't we all, here? The point of me saying this, is, toss us another bone, hmm? I'm sure you know what I mean. ^.~ It's been too many chapters between...
Thank you, lovely. I hope this review will push you on for a new chapter.
-Kari-

Who ever said this:

“not the best flick out there. It's preeettty amateur. You could work on grammar, and your original voice.
It's good, for pure fluff, and gyrating madness, but nothing else.

So far, it's OK”

Is a jerk. This is far better than some I have read on this site. Far better. At least you keep up and update. Some just do one chapter and stop. You change the POV's, give twists to the plot and more. Everything that keeps a story interesting. Keep it up. Don't listen to those like the one who wrote that.

I love the story and jump for joy when ever I see a current update date.

*hugs*

I love werewolf and vampire stories and i love them when they are written so well like this one, this is my favourite story on this website now, theres quite a few excellent stories floating around but the authors just abandonded them theres this one story that has 102 chapters and is nearly finished and hasn't been updated in 1 1/2 years like are you serious? you spend over a year writing it and don't finish it??

Keep up the great work! we love you!