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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u have to make another story just for enfer....or better yet just make sure delancy have both of them for herself.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing, I can't wait to hear what happens next. And BTW, the spelling and grammer isn't that bad, and personally, if you are picking up on it , that person is not reading the STORY. I devour these chapters so fast I don't even notice a misspelled word, I'm more worried about what is happening...and what is happening is hot...Chapters, not proofreading.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well first off I'd like to say that I do love the story.Drama is fun, vampires are fun, every thing's fun so far...
but if you ever want someone to spell check the entire thing for ya I'd be more than happy... just on some off chance.
Keep up the good work :D
but if you ever want someone to spell check the entire thing for ya I'd be more than happy... just on some off chance.
Keep up the good work :D
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOORAY another update.
Great chapter. Loved that flash back it was great. Keep it up.
Great chapter. Loved that flash back it was great. Keep it up.
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Thank you!!! *kisses your feet* thank you for updatin so quickly! im lovin it! is she gonna go back to myron now? or is she just dreamin alittle? i was alittle confused there. i dont know what these other people are talkin about this is great!!! keep pullin out these gems love and ill be sooo freakin happy!!! woot woot!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaggghh! The torture, the beautiful pain of wondering what comes next.
Actually I don't have to many problems with your language use. Only one, ok two complaints from me. Some times you confuse Byron and Myron (I can see why typing wise) and, when are you updating again?!?!
Actually I don't have to many problems with your language use. Only one, ok two complaints from me. Some times you confuse Byron and Myron (I can see why typing wise) and, when are you updating again?!?!
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Advice would be to ignore all the negative or flaming comments, I haven't even noticed a single mistake anywhere, this story is not boring and it most certainly is not too long. Just keep up the great work
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think people that flame stories need to get the sticks out of their asses and find something better to do. If they don't like the story, then they should stop reading it. Personally, I love your story and the little twists and turns that it takes. I love how real you're making the situations (even if it is with unreal creatures). It's unique and I just can't stop reading it.
Keep up the good work, hun!
Keep up the good work, hun!
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gha X3 i love this story! i think the thing i like most about it is the fact that almost all of it is a flashback, it's a different way of writing. i was a little confused when she was taken by the vampires because i thought that that was it for the werewolves, but i'm glad to see that they are back ^^ i cant wait ntil your next update
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter this was. The relationship she has with both Myron and enfer is unique and yet not much different then if one woman had 2 men fighting for her attentions.
Who cares if your spelling and grammer is off. This story has kept us all glued to your story and waiting for the next chapters. This was a great inner conversation for her.
I will defend your story writing against anyone. You are producing a wonderful story and if someone else can do better then let them and stop hasseling you.
Who cares if your spelling and grammer is off. This story has kept us all glued to your story and waiting for the next chapters. This was a great inner conversation for her.
I will defend your story writing against anyone. You are producing a wonderful story and if someone else can do better then let them and stop hasseling you.