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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that's good. I can't wait for the next chapters.
I love how this is almost borderline romance novel, but smart, and humorous. I especially loved the line: "I looked where every healthy, straight woman would look." Pure gold! Delancy is saying everything that I want to say in one of these situations. Don't go down there! How romance-novel is this? What would you do for a Klondike bar?
I have only one problem with it: Continuity's kinda shaky. If you could fix that, it would be even better. At some points it's a little hard to remember where everyone is and what's going on.
I love how this is almost borderline romance novel, but smart, and humorous. I especially loved the line: "I looked where every healthy, straight woman would look." Pure gold! Delancy is saying everything that I want to say in one of these situations. Don't go down there! How romance-novel is this? What would you do for a Klondike bar?
I have only one problem with it: Continuity's kinda shaky. If you could fix that, it would be even better. At some points it's a little hard to remember where everyone is and what's going on.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I completly love your story! It is fantastic! I can't wait for more 5/5 stars!!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!! This story is back!! YAY!!!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say.. hehe from reading the reviews before this got hidden god "sand in their panties" that made me laugh hehe.
Its looking good that this story will get finished at last! yay!
Its looking good that this story will get finished at last! yay!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay u back i love your story
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whathappened to tis story
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are you still around
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey what happened to the story????
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The truth of the matter is EVERYONE involved in this fight is wrong.
I find that “bumping” is not expressly defined nor mentioned at all in the TOS which is *so* conveniently located only at the registration page and yet everyone keeps bitching that WFK broke the rules. Granted, after she was contacted by the Administrators she should have bought a fucking clue but their action was obviously necessary in helping her as well as idiots like her make better decisions in the future. Seriously, how daft can you be woman? Numerous warnings and blatant disrespect can ONLY end badly.
The administrators were wrong in the fact they did not remain impartial. I get the sense that they are on the opposition’s side. Although WFK did break the rules there was no real reason for them to write what they did on her profifle page. A simple message conveying that they stepped in to correct the situation would have sufficed, in this respect they are no better than the flamers that WFK sent after Adara.
Everyone is violating rule 8, communicating through comments including ADARA who is in violation of rule 9 right now because she is posting something on WTK after the issue has been supposedly dealt with just to “inflame.” How mature are you? At some point it ceased to be about doing the right thing and it became about pushing out someone you personally felt did not belong. So what the story didn’t resonate with you? You are not the be all and end all. Perhaps it was your own jealously that developed after reading something you felt was substandard for the amount of comments/hits/attention it received. It’s done, get over her, get over yourself and just let the Adminsitrators deal with her as it is their job. And *do* reply to this because it would only serve to illustrate my point that you CAN’T LET GO. Get your jollies elsewhere.
Finally we get to the minions, the people who are *so* easily manipulated and swayed by another they endanger their own membership to flame other people. Idiots. Remember rule 9 people? When did it ever seem like WFK could not take care of herself and that you HAD to step in on her behalf and slam another? I fully understand the need to stick up for friends but you also have to know limits. At some point they have to take care of themselves and it is sad reflection on you that you would lash out like trained dogs on Adara and anyone else who said anything against what you held to be true. Although the comments were unwanted, they were delivered with some fair amount of civility and respect and for a time dealt with the story and her abilities as an author which is the *other* purpose of the comments section.
Delete this, shred this I don’t care. Anyone who is not completely devoid of some semblance of common sense will understand what I’m saying.
I find that “bumping” is not expressly defined nor mentioned at all in the TOS which is *so* conveniently located only at the registration page and yet everyone keeps bitching that WFK broke the rules. Granted, after she was contacted by the Administrators she should have bought a fucking clue but their action was obviously necessary in helping her as well as idiots like her make better decisions in the future. Seriously, how daft can you be woman? Numerous warnings and blatant disrespect can ONLY end badly.
The administrators were wrong in the fact they did not remain impartial. I get the sense that they are on the opposition’s side. Although WFK did break the rules there was no real reason for them to write what they did on her profifle page. A simple message conveying that they stepped in to correct the situation would have sufficed, in this respect they are no better than the flamers that WFK sent after Adara.
Everyone is violating rule 8, communicating through comments including ADARA who is in violation of rule 9 right now because she is posting something on WTK after the issue has been supposedly dealt with just to “inflame.” How mature are you? At some point it ceased to be about doing the right thing and it became about pushing out someone you personally felt did not belong. So what the story didn’t resonate with you? You are not the be all and end all. Perhaps it was your own jealously that developed after reading something you felt was substandard for the amount of comments/hits/attention it received. It’s done, get over her, get over yourself and just let the Adminsitrators deal with her as it is their job. And *do* reply to this because it would only serve to illustrate my point that you CAN’T LET GO. Get your jollies elsewhere.
Finally we get to the minions, the people who are *so* easily manipulated and swayed by another they endanger their own membership to flame other people. Idiots. Remember rule 9 people? When did it ever seem like WFK could not take care of herself and that you HAD to step in on her behalf and slam another? I fully understand the need to stick up for friends but you also have to know limits. At some point they have to take care of themselves and it is sad reflection on you that you would lash out like trained dogs on Adara and anyone else who said anything against what you held to be true. Although the comments were unwanted, they were delivered with some fair amount of civility and respect and for a time dealt with the story and her abilities as an author which is the *other* purpose of the comments section.
Delete this, shred this I don’t care. Anyone who is not completely devoid of some semblance of common sense will understand what I’m saying.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too the above reviewer I'll admit the first few chapters were a bit bumpy but if actually bothered to read past the first chapter..