rate_review Reviews

I've got two kids at home with me, so I can only read this a few chapters at a time during naptime. I've only made it to chapter 10. But, so far, it's fucking awsome! I'm hooked.

(: I think the storyline is interesting. A bit confusing sometimes, but interesting. Don't let anyone bring you down if this is your form of self-expression!

Your descriptions in this chapter were so awesome, so can't wait for your next chapter, don't let the flaming losers get to you they are either jealous of your work or they are trolls out to provoke a response

OMG if you move PLEAE EMAIL ME.

Actually EMAIL me anyway its with my review.

Againg another great chapter keep it going if you can.

And as for those haters. GO GET A LIFE. And you haters email me and be reported for harassment. I AM SERIOUS.

Lmao... I've seen so much worse than this, I can't believe anyone would think this worthy of being reported! You're a good writer and whoever says your stories are unfit for this site really need to gain some perspective and take a look around the rest of the site 'cause really? At least your stuff is consensual, well written sex based around a plot... or maybe the plot's tangled in there, I'm not sure.

DeviantArt has a literature section with an Erotica category. Try there if you do decide to leave. I'm really enjoying this story.

Later :D

I so agree with Kellia theres some things posted in this sub-section that should belong in the Dark Fic area, i mean come on incest, incestual rape, rape and other hideous things those are reportable things, that moron that reported you writes stories about incest and doesn't have anywhere as many readers

Keep up the awesome work on this story theres only one other recent story that i could really recommend and thats Order of the Goddess

Hello. I have been reading your story for a while, but this is the first time I have decided to review. I just wanted to tell you to not allow some other author to discourage you. You do have a following and though I don't know you or this other author I can honestly say your story is well thought out. Though you have some mistakes it is nothing for anyone to bitch about. Sometimes your fingers get ahead of you and mistakes are made. Anyone who doesn't think they are free from error must have a high and mighty attitude. But anyway, I love your story and can't wait to read more. Please don't move this story.

I just read your new comments and Adara is a full on troll, she is trying to get you to do something that would violate TOS and i would bet $1,000 that shes lying about the reporting

So can't wait for your new story and the end of this one!

I just wanted to say that I am really proud of you for sticking up for yourself!!!

You go girl! I am glad I make you feel welcome! :)