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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh! you always end the chapter with sliff hangers so I cant find a good place to stop ^__^
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
4 chapters so far in one night! youve got me hooked!
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the poem!!!!!
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An Enfer..delancy..Myron sandwich yum. Excellent update
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yum, that was deeelicious.
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me this letter does not mean you are not going to keep writing this wonderful story? I hope not because it was be a sin to stop this just when everything is getting very exciting. I'm drawn to your story and I want to keep reading it. Once you finish it, I plan to re-read the whole thing and enjoy every moment of it with out any interrupting commercials of waiting for the next chapter.
The unfortunate thing about a place like AFF is there is always someone who delights in making a bright writer miserable. There is never a real good reason other then personal opinion or taste and they must make you suffer for it. As the old saying goes, you "can't please everyone all the time".
I look forward to reading any and all spin-offs from this story. Your characters have private stories to tell of themselves and we are all waiting with baited breath to read them. There are so many characters to do extra stories on that I'm sure it's been hard to choose among them for the next one to be written. Enfer is fascinating as is Warren and Eric. I find the werewolves equally interesting. The fight between Myron and Byron would be an interesting story to be told eventually, and I'm sure the late Falcon will have an interesting story to be told as well.
I must admit, I am more interested in the twin goddesses and whole sorted tale of how they came to be and how Enfer & Myron became direct decedents from these two ladies. There must be more then what you have already spoon fed us about them and I eagerly await any an all information about them as well.
Please keep up the writing, your story is a fresh approach to the usual Vampire/Werewolf approach. You've added magic, Fantasy, Romance, War and more to the telling. So, please keep writing and don't stop, we will keep reading and keep reviewing
The unfortunate thing about a place like AFF is there is always someone who delights in making a bright writer miserable. There is never a real good reason other then personal opinion or taste and they must make you suffer for it. As the old saying goes, you "can't please everyone all the time".
I look forward to reading any and all spin-offs from this story. Your characters have private stories to tell of themselves and we are all waiting with baited breath to read them. There are so many characters to do extra stories on that I'm sure it's been hard to choose among them for the next one to be written. Enfer is fascinating as is Warren and Eric. I find the werewolves equally interesting. The fight between Myron and Byron would be an interesting story to be told eventually, and I'm sure the late Falcon will have an interesting story to be told as well.
I must admit, I am more interested in the twin goddesses and whole sorted tale of how they came to be and how Enfer & Myron became direct decedents from these two ladies. There must be more then what you have already spoon fed us about them and I eagerly await any an all information about them as well.
Please keep up the writing, your story is a fresh approach to the usual Vampire/Werewolf approach. You've added magic, Fantasy, Romance, War and more to the telling. So, please keep writing and don't stop, we will keep reading and keep reviewing
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I love this story. Your characters or so detailed. I am tempted to create artwork of them!. I love the story line thus far and I can't wait for further additions to it. Keep it going!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't technically insulting you, I was just trying to be honest. You see, you didn't say she was overweight, you described her as being the perfect weight, and she's quite the little slut, but you describe her as being a virgin. I don't understand, you story has confused me a tad because here she is parading around sucking off a bunch of dudes and being totally fine with the fact that their mythical creatures, and she's still a virgin? That makes her kind of mary-sueish because a guy wants a girl who'll do stuff, but he also would rather be her first. Besides that it seems that everyone she encounters thinks she's this super amazing bombshell that they want to fuck. Later on in your story you said she was skittish about losing her virginity and being "raped" but the fact is, she's willing every time. You can't rape the willing, doll. She's just making excuses for her own promiscuity. And you said she wasn't a slut. . . . Well the situations you wrote her into say other wise. But you know, I'm cool, I get it, I'm reading erotica for a reason, I expect it, but your character's just a tad lacking, even though your story is fantastic. I'm just saying it's a tad vapid on the MC's part.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG another chapter. Hooray. And that was good, even the betral spoken at the end so unexpected.
As for that reveiwer. What story was he/she reading? You plainly stated her flaws. They obviously didn't read those parts. And just because many wolves wanted her, which you stated clearly that it was for her power, doesn't make her Mary Sue'ish. I mean come one whats wrong with a girl having alot of guys after her????? Besides I have seen stories like that and this isn't one of them.
As for that reveiwer. What story was he/she reading? You plainly stated her flaws. They obviously didn't read those parts. And just because many wolves wanted her, which you stated clearly that it was for her power, doesn't make her Mary Sue'ish. I mean come one whats wrong with a girl having alot of guys after her????? Besides I have seen stories like that and this isn't one of them.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Lady Pandora that isn't exactly a flame but its not positive either, she is not a Mary-Sue if you actually read it properly those wolfs were 'rabid' because she was special the wolves could smell something different in her i've seen fics with Mary-Sues and they are awful this is certainly not one of those.