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hey, your story is really beautiful. Although they'd never say it, they fell for each other a longer time ago...and in the last two chapters it seemed, that all of them is getting worse...but now finally it all comes to a good end. Please keep on writing soon

I'm enjoying your story and can't wait to see where you take it. Elijah can be stupid, but in the end, he seems to do the right thing. I think, in reality, to him, nothing would be worse that not having Bryant. Your timeline is a little confusing though. Sometimes it seems like only a couple of weeks have passed and then sometimes it's a couple of months. No matter what, I really hope you'll continue. Very few writers seem to get this far on their MPREG stories, so you've reached a point that not many other have reached. Kudos to you.

What's that saying "love and hate walk a thin line" this story perfect example.

love the story. pls. continue.

this story is excellent! i'm really enjoying it.

Oh my god! "Something I Can Never Forget" keeps getting better and better. :)
I LOVE love/hate relationships, and you portray one very well.
And the office sex was so hot.

Just one thing, it sometimes gets confusing where the POV changes from Bryant to Eli, and vice versa.
Since they're both "he"s and all.

But otherwise, great story!
Please update soon. ^^

Amazing story!
I pity both Eli and Bryant. Nicholas, too.
No one deserved it, but they all have to live with the guilt.
Chapter 2 was so HOT!
I could almost touch their desire through the screen.
...if that makes any sense. :D
Thank you for writing such a great story. :) Please write more!