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Ok, I've read to chapter three, I think I got this one mixed up with taming the warlord which is probably why I forgot I'd started it. Look...this is brilliant, I wish I had more time to read all of it. Your heroine is jussst endearing, I seriously love her character already. She is one minute this way, the next minute that way, I totally see why she gave in to the Orc so quickly, (who wouldn't? hehe),but I guess she won't be submissive for long... She cracks me up and this is soooo well written it's just a joy.! I won't lose it again!

Review Chapter 6 and 7.

I was surprised that chapter 5 wasn't the ending. I didn't really know how Anna would start to rebel (again) after giving in - so much. My answer - she's not, I guess she can't bet them - so she's joining them. Well..., REALLY did not see that happening.

Not into girl-on-girl(-on-girl), so this is a little hard for me to read (skimming throught some parts). However, your writing is really good and I am still curious to know where the plot is going. The only thing I'm sure about is that I haven't got a clue.

Hoping for the best.

I love this story. I truly do. Its so hot and the storyline is incredible. I am happy your continuing it. I love the interaction between the wives what a little I have read. Their bath times are my favorite. Hehe. Anyway great story. Can't wait for you to update.

:) Another wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work.

I followed this story from the beginning. I didn't think it would end so soon. As much as I liked the whole story and the what I thought was going to be more plot. I am disappointed it end of fast. Then the last chapter is her giving in, rather easily, to not just sex with the Master, but GROUP sex.

No, I didn't like it.

Author's Note: Guys, this story isn't over yet by a long shot. That end in Chapter 5 was just to signify the chapter was over.

I wonder how you managed to write five great chapters with me noticing just now... I must be sitting on my eyes! Please continue, it's so much fun!

Damn I can NOT believe I found this RIGHT before I need to sleep! bugga! I have a really bad orc fetish hehe. I can't wait to read this but it will have to wait till tomorrow, the mind is willing the flesh is weak and all that stuff. K...bookmarked, hanging...anything to do with orcs? I'm sold...I hope he has long black hair :D

oh please update soon!!!

GReat Chapter! I cant wait for the next one! Oh what will her punishment be?!