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for The Hunt

by Ele

person J42
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually enjoyed this chapter very much. Loved the coupling and how it delved deeper into the specifics of Andreji's and River's characters. Thanks!
person tf
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's good to see Andreji softening; hope the little River told his family won't get him in trouble-thanks for the update!
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. I kind of feel that he's settling for less though by being with Andreji
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it just me or is one giving up more than the other. Either way I'm going to read to find out what happens:
person sylia
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good fic, quite like the plot. Gimme more!!
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More more! ^^
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I originally liked the action of the earlier ch, but this last one was kinda slow for me. However you did say it was an interim ch so I look forward to reading what comes next.
person J42
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the gentle update... after the hot scene. :D Hadn't realized he had his mobile all this time. Does help to wrap up some loose ends on the family side. Nice that his cousin calls him up.
(PS: "send the money back I’ve lent" => borrowed.)
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wahts going on its bin so long since you last updated im starting to wonder?
person Poppy
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally it's chapter 20. I attached to this story from the first time I read but I didn't give some review because I like to read more to get good know to the story. I love this one because it had the deep in them, had many background to find out. and what's happen next to the relationship between River and Andreji?! Hope you know I support you. See in next chapter.