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for The Hunt

by Ele

person IanPhilippe
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww this story captures me more and more with every word... please, update soon or the impatience will kill me X3 I need more of this masterfully constructed story... :)
person Aleks
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW what a surprise......who would have thought that!?!

and they just started to really get good along....

person wynja
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was a twist! Great!
person roro237
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You won't leave us there for to long will you?:) That was a shocker! Who is this mystery man? Why is he there? What does he want and how is River going to get rid of him:) All the important questions I'll be back to read and fine out ^_^
person Anon
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Now that is truly ironic. Poor River...
person heroineM
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i've just read the hole story and loved it. Your concept of vampirism is interesting and characters well-rounded and deep. I fell in love with Andreji and I agree with his thoughts on love and friendship, passion can burn fast, but love and understanding should stay!Please continue; I'd love to see their relationship deepening.
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! The realtionship between River and his Master is twisted and enthralling. Please update soon, can't wait to see what happens.
person crazyforkakashi
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story cought my eye and I have very much enjoyed it and look forward to the next update.
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"River goggled at his Master. He felt so small, so inexperienced all of a sudden."

Aaw.. ^^
person J42
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! 1590 - goodness. Really enjoyed the snuggling and the plot thickening - thanks for revving things up! :-)