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for The Hunt

by Ele

schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! I was actually hoping River's escape attempt would be successful. Wishful thinking *sigh*
This keeps getting better.
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 and I feel like this story suddenly developed way to quick. It's still well written but the pace? Not good.
person T
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Definitely the best vampire story I've read in ages. Bravo!
person BabyVampy
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would so love to read this! But the weird symbols are upsetting the flow of your story. I will check back at a later date to see if they are fixed. (and if I sound aroggant or negative, I really apologize! It's not how I mean to come across).

Thanks.
person steph8503
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think its a great idea to start another volume. im kind of curious sbout what he will be like once he's turned completely.
person smint45
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story!I really like the turns when Andreji goes against the leader and when Demyan apears! And please go on with the prequel it starts promising!Fantastic story!I really like the turns when Andreji goes against the leader and when Demyan apears! And please go on with the sequel it starts promising!
person Darsha
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love your story i hope you do continue on with a second part to it cause im on the edge of my seat on wanting to river getting bit and turning and what he goes through with the new life he is trust into what about his powers and so on please give me a HINT when it will be up
HINT HINT HITN HINT HINT HINT HINT HINT HINT HINT HINT HINT HINT

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
person Ailsam
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have loved this story and cannot wait for volume two; like River I still have many questions! Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
person annushka
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I see that you changed the story slightly, I loved the first scene as it was (very hot), but I guess the new one fits well with the rest of the story. I wanted to let you know that the edited version of chapter 2 has problems, the ' don't show, instead, there is a weird sign.
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, the characters are awesome! It would be awesome if you did a second volume ( it just seems like the kind of story that needs to keep going) ^-^