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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh gott!! lukas and the others had to watch that?!?!? why oh why?!?!?! they are going to be killed, aren't they?? and why has andreji taken river to be his fledgling??? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
ASOTA
ASOTA
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. I love where this is going!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I bow to my four reviewers. Thank you so much for the positive feedback!
The next update is half finished. I have some other business to attend to, but I am confident that I will post it in the next days. :)
The next update is half finished. I have some other business to attend to, but I am confident that I will post it in the next days. :)
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please continue, i think the story is hot as hell.:)
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nyuuu,(must resist the urge to blatantly beg and whine for more)
I'm guessing mr. tall mystery silver hair is a vampire of some sort, still, I wonder what his relation to Ray is.
Oh and your little green hunter is soo sweet, I love his character.
Glad for the quick update.
Keep up the nice work!
I'm guessing mr. tall mystery silver hair is a vampire of some sort, still, I wonder what his relation to Ray is.
Oh and your little green hunter is soo sweet, I love his character.
Glad for the quick update.
Keep up the nice work!
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story - intriguing, and shaping up well. Nice mix of dialogue and scene setting. Really looking forward to the next chapter, hint hint ;-) Purr
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*attempts to recollect scrambled braincells*
Response: doubleplussgood.
This is a really nice story. I love the concept.
Though I do find their snogging to come a bit abrupt, i still really like it.
It's nice and wordy, and has a lotta room for a nice little back story.
I'd love to see more of this :)
Response: doubleplussgood.
This is a really nice story. I love the concept.
Though I do find their snogging to come a bit abrupt, i still really like it.
It's nice and wordy, and has a lotta room for a nice little back story.
I'd love to see more of this :)
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written - eager to read more! Definitely on my favorites list!