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OMG! Poor River! This can't be good!

Oh it was great. more please

Loved this chapter. It was hilarious...especially when Andreji was just standing there watching River. >XD

I think someone may be getting a "spanking" when they get "home", lol. Of course, Andreji is hungry...which is probably not a good thing for River.

Well, like I said, I loved it and hope you continue this story. Unfortunately, some good stories DO get abandoned by their writers...*ignores the accusing stares from certain people* But yeah, keep writing. ^^

I'm pretty busy at the moment, thus the shortness of the update, but I am not the abandoning type, I promise.

OH SHIT SON, YOU GOT CAUGHT.


Hahahaha.
Oh Andreji. Sneaky soda pirate.

ooooo i bet Rivers definitly in trouble. love it!!

*giggle* They're so cute together. I think Andreji's constant calm is intriguing. It makes one want to both trust and fear him at the same time, since, well, he has to get angry sometimes, right? I sort of feel the same about River's capture. Obviously, I felt bad for him. It must be horrible to have your freedom taken away from you. Still, I couldnt help feel delighted when Andreji finally showed up. *giggle* I guess River was right about one thing: Andreji's not easy to escape from.

I like it so far. Its interesting how you made your vampires. Its different and I like that. The silver giving albino features was original to me and even the way vampires are created is different, too. When I say something is "different", then that is a good thing. Just so you know.

I had guessed that Andreji was a vampire and/or involved with them in some way. He's a very mysterious and aloof character...*is drawn to those kind of characters liks a bug is to light*

Something tells me that River is way in over his head. Poor little guy. ^^

Well, keep writing. I'd love to see how the plot unfolds.

Haha. Clever River.

Does he really think his luck is going to last for that long? :O

Maybe it will.
Andreji's not stupid...
Hmmmm.

Still love this story.~

Thank you for updating. I like that the story moves forward. First I thought the two would forever sit in Andreji’s rooms. But now River made his escape or at least it seems, that he did make it. It was a bit easy, wasn't it? So I guess it won't be over. Please update soon :)