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for A Touch of Sight

by cukid9

person lovecups
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YaY!! you used the taco line!! I am now immortalized in print! Sweet! I liked this chapter very much. It was sexy as hell, shocking, and helped to move the story along nicely I think. It covers a lot of back story, and yet it keeps making you think of more questions, all good chapters do this. This has been the best chapter so far I think. I think that the most important thing in a story...aside from luscious, dark, and sinful (those are their dwarf names you know... forget Happy and Doc)...is that it provokes thought, and I know that this one had me thinking. Thank you so much!!
person lovecups
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun....so who is this Lucy and what is her relation to Lia....hmmm...I liked this chapter too. Rade is deliciously adorable in his small jealousies...and I enjoy that he and Lia had a nakie water soaked moment...'cause I kinda have a thing for sharing showers...grrr...hits my buttons. I liked the development here...I like knowing a little bit more about all of the hotness trio...and especially Rade...'cause don't tell Sorin and Lucien but he is my favorite. Good and solid...I can't wait to see what happens with the one eyed hottie...and I think that it is really funny that he is one-eyed, almost seven feet tall, wears a funny eye patch with magic symbols, oh yeah and lets not forget that he is unnaturally gorgeous and yet Lia still thinks that he is human. I think her naivety is why I like her so much...'cause she is so smart and so stupid at the same time...
person Starcrossed
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*refills the chocolate fountain just for the nice sexy scene in the shower*

-_- college sucks btw...just in case you didn't know that...it doesn' suck as bad as high school *mountains of schoolwork comes in from the now open door, swamping the poor starcrossed under them* but still sucks
person M M
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Murdered? So who killed her? Vampires, maybe Rade himself? A demon or demon hunters like Gavin? More and more questions. Can't wait to find out the answers.
person Jordan
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always, the chapter was amazing! I love how the story is moving along and I really enjoyed the shower scene, lol! Man, after that I was like "Gavin? Who cares!" But, I can't wait to see what other suprises this story has for me and I think Gavin is going to be a part of that bigger story. I just want to say again that I wish you and your grandmother all the best.
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep, definitely still enjoying! (and happy to wait as long as it takes, if all the chapters are as good as that one! :)
person leftat11
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad you got past the writers blog. I still love this srory, and it is still hot. horah for Rade and Lia!
person Starcrossed
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*is in college but is still finding time to stalk you for the next chapter, oh and I also hand out chocolate when you need it, so I'm not the creepy stalker type*
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i looove your storyyy :]
its amazinggg, i like rade and lia.
I want them to be togetherr ;p
person enerim
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I've enjoyed this story so far and hopefully in the next chapter there will be much more 'action' between Rade and Ophelia.