rate_review Reviews

Of course I'm still reading!!! I am sorry to hear about your grandmother...I lost mine a few years ago...so I do understand. It will get better. I actually didn't notice anything really weird about the beginning...it was fine...it works...I know that I tend to focus on the small things that don't matter instead of the big things that do, like lia does in this chapter...so I thought that the focus on her gloves was appropriate...I enjoyed the interplay between her and Gavin...and of course Lia and my favorite vampire....I don't think that much needs to be said about that. I liked the sequence with her and Raum...but I feel that maybe it can be fleshed out a little more...it happens really quickly, and I think that you might want to play up the creepy quotient a little bit more...give us a wider spacing between her warning signals...and then really play up his appearance at the bar...and I maybe would have her make it to the restroom...calm down and then come back out to be hearded...that will give the readers a false sense of security...so that we are even more afraid...just a suggestion...other than that I really loved it...I like knowing more about the one-eyed hottie...cool.

wow! so good! good writing and interesting plot.
i'm addicted :)

HA! I was close enough, I was thinking Gavin was an angel of sorts. Or a divine being...*starts handing out more chocolate before being covered with her schoolwork again*

ish! xo you aren't going make her and gavin a couple are you? he seems too full of himself. what about rade??

only commenting because you write so well that i can't help but get emotionally involved. please keep up the good work ;)

This story is a-mazing!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I just found the story and found myself agitated because I knew at the end of chapter 18 there was nothing more!

YAY! I am so happy to see another chapter! All I can say about this chapter is "And the plot thickins..." lol. I love it! Does Lia get laid in the next chapter? I hope so, poor girl, lol! Also, I am very sorry for your loss and I wish the best for you and yours.

A God!?! Didn't see that coming. What kind of god exactly? Where did Rade run off to? He should have been there to help. We never did find out what happened to Rade that left him in such bad shape that he fed on Lia. Sorry to hear about your loss. My thoughts and prayers are with you.

Hope to see more VERY soon!

*Showers you with chocolate kisses* Hmmm...Rade and Lia and chocolate and kissing? Sounds like a good combination! I am in such suspense waiting for your next chapter.

Sooooo since Halloween is coming up and all *dumps a shit load of chocolate candies into your lap* NOW WRITE! :P