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for A Touch of Sight

by cukid9

person Starcrossed
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think she was a sexy obstinate moth...and good job on the lemonade! Shame Gavin wasn't in it, but I'll give you props on having good dialogue...most lemons I have to pretty much ignore the speaking parts because they seem so...I have no words for it :P

*mountains of chocolate for you*
person Alicat1194
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good freaking crap I think my monitor melted that was so hot! :D

Though now we have to wonder what Raum will do now that his favourite plaything has been 'broken' ;)
person M M
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If only every girls first time could be that good! I'm totally jealous! I have more questions, but I think I'll have to catch my breath first.
person Starcrossed
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo...not to rush you...

*refills the chocolate fountain before going to emo because college starts back again tomorrow*
person Starcrossed
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AND THE WORLD SAID, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!


*mountains of almighty chocolate everywhere*


So everyone knew it was going to be a good next year...
person Veronica
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
New chapter, please! I love Rade in this chapter; very possessive and whatnot. I can't wait for all of that tension to be 'dealt' with. :D Also, I've read all of your complete & original fanfictions and some of the incomplete ones -- agh! I've also resorted to reading the pieces you recommend... ner. :) You're a great storyteller!
person Starcrossed
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!

*piles of chocolate comes raining down*
person lovecups
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, so yeah...I REALLY hope she accepts the last option (cause you know I would....mmmm...tasty) I did enjoy this chapter...but it is too short!!! I want to know more about "the God" and the Corps and how they know each other...and I also want to know how Lia knew about the sister thingy...but other than that I really liked the whole chappie. Good stuff...keep it coming...and hope you have a happy holiday. :)
person Kitten
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo! this chapter can not be over it just cant. I am so addicted to this. Vampires and mmmmm. Next chapter soon please ta?
person A
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NEEEED more to read!!! That little tidbit was a nice snack, but please hurry to give us some real sustinance! All this plot is so interesting and interwoven! Really well done. Please update soon so I can get over my Ophelia/Rade starvation. LOTS OF LOVE! p.s. Yours is the first original story I look for! If I only have time to pop on, I look up your story and check for an update.