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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*bounces up and down* So any more yummy stuff in the next chapter? Is it a goodie threesome? *giggles and hand the author some chocolate*
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
P.S
I personally don't have a problem doing first times...
>.>
Anyways!
*hands out chocolates*
I personally don't have a problem doing first times...
>.>
Anyways!
*hands out chocolates*
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD NO!!!! It can not stop there, that chapter was so good and with the vampires and the sexy times and the OMG I want more please tah thank you very much please?
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So can we have Gavin in with her now? Sexy sexy threesome! =^-^= Just kidding...or not :P I've actually been re-working on a couple of my fanfics, most of them were lost when my hard drive decided to die so I'll probably take awhile getting them done. Besides school hasn't been very nice and I find myself with less and less time each day to work on them.
*Hands out some chocolate and refills that fountain*
*Hands out some chocolate and refills that fountain*
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, loved it, loved it! This story is one of the best I have ever read and I can not wait for the next chapter. This story was so entrancing, the drama, the suspense, everything about it was amazing and I can honestly say that I wish I could write like you do! I look forward to the next chapter being that I will probably read all the chapters again. lol. ^.^ Till next time. Ja Mata Misawo
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you did great don't worry about it...first times are hard...but this one was fairly accurate. I think you did well. I enjoy Rade so much!! and aparently so does ophelia...(evil grin) I cant wait until all the loose ends are tied up!! I did go back and read that chapter btw...I like the re-write, I also noticed after the fact that he mentions the sister...so oops! Sorry!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving the last chapter! First's are always hard to write, as they never happen like that, but thats what fantacy is for, its how it should be. And your last chapter was definatly how it should be.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!!!~
*dies*
that chapter was...beyond remarkable...too bad every girls first time isn't with a super sexy, dominate, caring, sensual vampire! OMGGG i cant wait to see what happens next!!
*dies*
that chapter was...beyond remarkable...too bad every girls first time isn't with a super sexy, dominate, caring, sensual vampire! OMGGG i cant wait to see what happens next!!
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, so not liking to write, "the first time taking a virgin scenario"
you did a bang up job!!! I think Ophelia liked it too!!! Very well done!
Nice erotic scene and language and feeling and... how did that mattress feel
on her back?! HA!! Really good job!!! Now. all you have to do is work in
the big guy!! GAVIN!! HA! (Just kidding, no pressure!)
Thanks for the great story!
R
you did a bang up job!!! I think Ophelia liked it too!!! Very well done!
Nice erotic scene and language and feeling and... how did that mattress feel
on her back?! HA!! Really good job!!! Now. all you have to do is work in
the big guy!! GAVIN!! HA! (Just kidding, no pressure!)
Thanks for the great story!
R
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"We're not really going to do this, you know," Rade murmured"
As soon as I read that I was like "What?!" Then I read Lia's line, and I just had to laugh, because that was exactly what I was thinking!! Anyway, it was another fabulous chapter! I can imagine that first times would be hard to write because they are usually really awkward. I think you did a really good job with it, so you shouldn't have stressed. Looking forward to the next one!
As soon as I read that I was like "What?!" Then I read Lia's line, and I just had to laugh, because that was exactly what I was thinking!! Anyway, it was another fabulous chapter! I can imagine that first times would be hard to write because they are usually really awkward. I think you did a really good job with it, so you shouldn't have stressed. Looking forward to the next one!