rate_review Reviews

I keep meaning to review and then get interupted. I'm realy enjoying this story, Rade is an intresting character, and i love Lia's little hissy fits, it's nice to see a herione with real girl like qwerks, fears and insecurities.

Keep up the good work, and dont wory to much about what outher people think, write for yourself.

yay!! GREAT chapter, but awww you can't leave it like that!!!

Naw I like this chappie...I was just wondering...why would she let someone shampoo her hair if she is so afraid of touch? I like that she is feeling the need to start changing though...y'know...like the Vamps opened her eyes for her or something...I dig that. I am thinking that you may want to mark the passage of time in this chapter a little bit better in some way though...because I guess I was a little bit slow on the uptake that she had left the beauty parlor, because I didn't get the transition from evening to morning.(could just be user error though...I'm a bit on the tired side this evening) Yeah Vamps can be cliche...but I think that you have figured out a new and more modern approach...I liked that. Keep it coming...It's nifty so far.

I think that you were wrong, I pretty much liked this last chapter. I liked learning about the relationship between Lia and her friend. It helped me to begin to round out Lia's character. I think that the ending of it was kind of appropriate, I just wished that I knew more about what her and her friend were doing in the end with the hand holding thingy. There was also a sentence that I think has a bit of a typo...it's where the one eyed hottie and the main character were talking about skepticism. I think that he means to say "and yours don't" instead of "and you don't". P.S. Rade is absolutely yummy sounding. Great job on the creation of such a sexy-wexy technically non-living being. oooh!

I'm really enjoying your story. Can't wait to read what happens next. More naughty vamps please. *wink*

This is a great read so far. It is the best yet. I really enjoyed it. I am looking forward to more.