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for A Touch of Sight

by cukid9

person Jordan
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I have to say I love all your stories, but this one is my favorite! I read your story Brier Wood and I love that one, but THIS story takes my breath away! I love all the characters and can really sympathise with all of them. I hope you write another chapter soon as I can't wait to see what happens next, and to get more vamp trio action ;).
person M M
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story. VERY different from the other, but it's good also. Can't wait to find out who the new mystery man is, and if Rade will be protective/possessive of Ophelia. For someone who doesn't socialize shes got a lot of men suddenly. Must be rough!
person Jordan
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I LOVED this chapter! I think that this chapter shows without doubt that the vampire's aren't as harmless as they seem! Also we got to find out more about the collars (which was an awesome touch, by the way). Hmm, I wonder who walked in the door... I have a feeling I know who it is, but I don't know for sure... GAH, don't keep me in suspense for too long!
person Starcrossed
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah the Cabaret! ^-^ I remember having to do songs from the musical of that namesake...anyways, I thought the chapter was good. And I shall stalk you till the next one comes out, that or be lazy and send my dear vampire friends to do it....or be even more lazy and just pull out my chocolate bars and say YOU AIN'T GETTING ANY UNTILL YOU POST ANOTHER CHAPTER! *breaths* So get typing! *innocent look like she isn't really going to do what she threatens to do but everyone knows not to trust it*
person leftat11
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Liking the quote from the Marquis de sade, clever girl, it's very fiting, his works after all prity well spawned the erotica genre.

Nothing like dangerous men, at least Lia is not a walk over, but i do worry for her, she is such a nice girl, and perhaps a little to nieeave for her own good. I'm litraly sting reading thinking oh gods i hope she isn't walking in to the lions den.

And yes, your last chapter was very raunch, but not seady. i hate writing that over does that reads er how to put it, like a porn film. I try to avoid it in my own writing. and yours had a touch of class about it. I supose romace is the key and your story has that. Loving the french bistro/ club theame going by the way. Moulan rouge all the way! (Though abstanth is somthing to be avoided, i can speek from expreiance on that)

person Marta
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every time I read the different quotes at the beginning, I always think, "Fear is the mind-killer!" Which is a quote from Dune.
person Waiting to take another bite out of the vampire sandwich
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update soon. I am waiting anxiously to find out what happens next!
person leftat11
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Maravlously raunchy. Loved it! Sorian and Lucian are cheeky little devils arnt they? The only critsisum i have is that it ended to soon, you tease! When oh when are Lia and Rade going to get it together???
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, if that's the raw version, I'm not sure I could handle the refined one! :D

The dream sequence worked, realistic, but still ethereal :)
person A
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking the story so far. Wow, that last chapter was hot. I want Lia to overcome her fears so much! The mythology is very well constructed. It is great how you can weave all that emotion into the story. My heart is still racing!