rate_review Reviews

Yay, a new chapter! What a good present after vacation. To answer your question, it wasn't who I thought it was. I thought it was the evil guy from the vision a few chapters back. I wasn't even close! Oh well, I like this better! Oh, and I am excited to see the vamp trio, next chapter! Don't make us reviewers wait to long!

Interesting twist...

*plops a huge pile of chocolate next to you* There...now write! =^-^=

You did a good job at the back ground revalation. I have to say i'm enjoying the twists and turns of Ophilia, just when you think you have a handle on her she reveils another facate to her personality. Rade as ever was hot.

*starts pacing again, waiting for the next chapter...trying to be patient*

This chapter has left me bursting with oh so many questions. I dont think the amount of sugar i have consumed today is going to help me any either. who is Lucy? Is Ophilia a reincarnation of Rade's beloved Lucy, or does she just remind him of her? Will Lia ever get over her many insecuritys and get with Rade as i expect after a few hundred years he sould be prity good between the sheets? And who was that man???? I'm not normaly a big vampire story reader, after reading dracular and the carpathian novels evrything else seems like a steryotype. Your story just works. I think it's lia, she is a very engaging and endearingly flawed. Sometimes i just want to shake her. I havent wanted to do that to a character in a story since i read the farseer novels.

Nice work, you realy have to keep going untill all those questions are resolved or i will actuly go mad.

So yeah...that was one of the largest cliff hangers EVER!! but it's ok... I forgive you...simply because you created the sinfully yummy vamps that exude sex from every pore of their being...grrr. Me likie. Anyhoo...I did enjoy this chappie yet again. I didn't really have much for constructive criticism...I have to say your writing has really begun to mature, compared to some of your earlier stories. I dig that you have thickened things out... your characterizations are really good...they always seem to flesh out/evolve..especially in your latest few stories...I really like how you are playing out the storyline...there are all these questions, and not a whole lot of answers yet...it keeps the reader hooked...then at the end of the chapter...you always end up thinking...WTF!!! NO! I have to know if my theory about Soren being Rade's long lost illegitimate childs third cousin twice removed is right!!!.... Or...maybe that's just me. :)

Kyaa! I love this story! It flows pretty well(I'm half asleep, so the fact that I followed it at all is an accomplishment).

However....evil cliffie!!!!! *wants to know who scary person from Lia's past bad*

nooo don't leave it like that! i have to know who he is!

*starts handing out tons and tons of chocolate bars* There you go =^-^= Nice chapter...except FOR THE FREAKIN' CLIFF HANGER!!!

But since you updated so quickly, I'll ignore that part...

Argh! Cliffhanger! That's just mean! ::pout:: :D

(otherwise a good (if messy) chapter :)