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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He would have thought he went suddenly blind, if not for the condom, now being rolled over Fen's thick length, glowing in the dark like a beacon for lost sailors.
Excuse me while I gigglesnort my way through the rest of the day. Also, Fen bening able to see in the dark and letting Ethan know just at the right monent is hilarious. And, of course, the sex was mindmelting. You have a really nice style: not too wordy yet you give us so much. Great word choices and description.
Excuse me while I gigglesnort my way through the rest of the day. Also, Fen bening able to see in the dark and letting Ethan know just at the right monent is hilarious. And, of course, the sex was mindmelting. You have a really nice style: not too wordy yet you give us so much. Great word choices and description.
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Who would geuss that glow in the dark condoms could be sexy? Of course these two can't help but be sexy. Can't wait for more Rooftop updates.
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is too funny. it was a nice break.
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! What a nice, naughty little side-fic. As always, well done! It was a nice mini distraction from all of the emotional turmoil in the last chapter of Rooftop. It's kind of cute (sorry...I couldn't think of a better adjective on short notice) to see Fen being somewhat kinky in his clinical way, and Ethan squirming uncomfortably at the very thought. Plus, it was very cool that in this little side-fic you touched on the possibilities present (at least in the bedroom) if Ethan had bonded with Fen instead of just the other way around.
So, I loved this little tangent roll-in-the-hay snippet.
So, I loved this little tangent roll-in-the-hay snippet.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This. Rules.
I don't think I've ever seen a story based on glow in the dark condoms! I loved it! It was hilarious. Ethan doesn't realise how kinky he is, obviously. He always ends up enjoying these things. I guess he'll get more comfortable eventually. Maybe. Fen is just amazing. He's so dirty. Although he put the odd images of pregnant Ethan in my head... You're a great writer. I just love your work.
I don't think I've ever seen a story based on glow in the dark condoms! I loved it! It was hilarious. Ethan doesn't realise how kinky he is, obviously. He always ends up enjoying these things. I guess he'll get more comfortable eventually. Maybe. Fen is just amazing. He's so dirty. Although he put the odd images of pregnant Ethan in my head... You're a great writer. I just love your work.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Muahahahaha!!! Hottest oneshot ever!!! ^^ I LOOOOOOVED it!!!
Fen is such a cool guy! and he's so funny! And just so freaking perfect for Ethan!! I absolutely love him! n______n
Anyways, Thanks alot!!! *hugs* This was perfect! ^^
Fen is such a cool guy! and he's so funny! And just so freaking perfect for Ethan!! I absolutely love him! n______n
Anyways, Thanks alot!!! *hugs* This was perfect! ^^
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! DAMN!!! Oh this is too funny. I read your one shots yesterday for both the Rooftop and Love Me stories, but after I finished I was like you know basking in the character’s afterglow, so I did not have enough energy to review till now. (You really wore me out, next time I’ll have to read each one on separate days, so I can review them quicker.) Wellll now that I have rested up a bit what can I say? It was….. yummylicous! Smuttylicious! And just darn good licous. I know they’re not real words, and I’m sure it is all miss-spelled but hey, if Bounce can come up with bootylicous then so can I. love, love, love your one shots, you have a wonderful gift. And I so enjoyed it all. Who was it that said “please sir, may I have some more?”
Oh before I forget, I’m dying to find out exactly what kind of creature Fen is. During all of the lovely sexiness they bit into each other to taste the blood, I believe Ethan asked Fen to mark him again and the blood enhanced the pleasure? So what is he, a vampire with wings, a vampire grim reaper? Oh I know he’s a vampire satyr right? What? What is he? Ohhh I just can’t wait for your next update.
Oh before I forget, I’m dying to find out exactly what kind of creature Fen is. During all of the lovely sexiness they bit into each other to taste the blood, I believe Ethan asked Fen to mark him again and the blood enhanced the pleasure? So what is he, a vampire with wings, a vampire grim reaper? Oh I know he’s a vampire satyr right? What? What is he? Ohhh I just can’t wait for your next update.
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... this was so sexy! i was giggling the whole time i was reading it. haha. ok some things i'm going to point out. one, i'm SO happy ethan obvoiously loves fen in this chapter- to the point of being jealous over little things such as talking to the girl and the magazine, because in honest relationships partners DO get jealous over little things sometimes. two, the details that you did not shy away from made this so much more real, for example, the light hairs on his legs. cuz we all have hair people! so thank you for that little bit. and lastly, thank you for giving your reader's something fluffy to fall back on after that tear-jerking 6th chapter. thank you!! and much love!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Lunarwench!
I liked this oneshot very much. VERY much! *grins* The idea with the flourescent condom was great - though Fen had to be a meanie and spoil Ethan's fun at watching. But he made it up so it's okay I guess...
Anyway, that was fluffy and naughty at the same time - a favourite mixture of mine. Can't wait to see what ideas Fen got out of this magazine. *smirks a little*
On a sidenote: You didn't lost me as a reader with your last chapter of "Rooftop" but I think your overdid it with the angst and Ethan's reaction. But it's your story and I didn't have to watch my family die on me, never got sodomized with a broomstick or met an alien so what do I know. Just think Ethan's behaviour was not only bipolar but almost schizophrenic. But at least at the end of the chapter there was a silber lining :-)
On a second sidenote: Will there ever be sex with Ethan well... penetrating Fen. That would be really sexy. He might appear a little shy and self-consciuos but if Fen pushes the right buttons... It might be the way to make their bond two-way...
Whatsoever, I want to thank you for that great oneshot and hope you continue "Rooftop" soon. Greetings
Nathaniel
I liked this oneshot very much. VERY much! *grins* The idea with the flourescent condom was great - though Fen had to be a meanie and spoil Ethan's fun at watching. But he made it up so it's okay I guess...
Anyway, that was fluffy and naughty at the same time - a favourite mixture of mine. Can't wait to see what ideas Fen got out of this magazine. *smirks a little*
On a sidenote: You didn't lost me as a reader with your last chapter of "Rooftop" but I think your overdid it with the angst and Ethan's reaction. But it's your story and I didn't have to watch my family die on me, never got sodomized with a broomstick or met an alien so what do I know. Just think Ethan's behaviour was not only bipolar but almost schizophrenic. But at least at the end of the chapter there was a silber lining :-)
On a second sidenote: Will there ever be sex with Ethan well... penetrating Fen. That would be really sexy. He might appear a little shy and self-consciuos but if Fen pushes the right buttons... It might be the way to make their bond two-way...
Whatsoever, I want to thank you for that great oneshot and hope you continue "Rooftop" soon. Greetings
Nathaniel
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well done !! It's pretty hot !!
Love your other stories...
Love your other stories...