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Don't worry about Raven's last name. I forget things all the time. *embarrassed blush* X3 I almost can't wait for Hourglass, but I will 'cuz you're just that awesome. ^//w//^

As for doing something for me... My birthday is on May 27th, so a little written present would be nice. Thing is, I don't really know what I'd like you to write. X3 An update to any of your fics, original or otherwise, would be cool. ^////^ I'd ask for you to write a oneshot of one of my stories, because I'd like to see how you would interpret my characters, but I can't do that because a requested fanfic just sounds... so very wrong. XP Besides, I can't ask you to take precious time out of your day just to read my fics. X3

So an update it is. ^////^ Maybe War of the Animum, Requiem of Janus, Shattered Children or Chronicles of Valentine. I'll let you know closer to the big day. X3 *hugs Draco-san*

lmao Now I feel really sorry for Sleet. XD Still, being able to find Frost like that should be a good reason for him to accept his anima, shouldn't it? If only to kick the man's ass for leaving poor Yaris all alone like that.

On a completely unrelated note, in Chapter 2 of The Advent of Courage, Raven's last name was "Tuesti" all over the temple. In Chapter 4 Alaris calls him "Thiest." Which one is correct? Not another Shattered Dreams slip, is it? X3 Not that I mind, really, it's just a little confusing. X3

Very nice, you updated! I really love this story, it's a pleasant retreat from all the predictable stories. Not to mention I love Sleet, and feel so frustrated for him! Something tells me he's about to get royally screwed over, I hate it when that happens...

I understand Sleet's reaction to everything, too. Being about as religious as he is, I wouldn't want anything to do with the gods, either. X3 Good thing it's a story to me. ^//w//^ I'm just waiting for something to happen that'll give him no choice but to take part in the war. XD

Kind of reminds me of one of the early chapters of Shattered Dreams. Only Sleet got some warning on what was going on long before a certain gunman did. lol X3

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, as always! ^o^ *hug*

Squee! One chapter closer to answers! XD I'm sure Alaris has 'em all. =3 And the explanation of magic was interesting. Btw, at the beginning of that conversation, you call Tungsten "Tseng." A little subconscious desire to work on Shattered Children, perhaps? ;3

Anyway, I loved the update and I look forward to the next one. ^w^ Keep up the great work! =D

ch9: I have a question. if tungsten wants to find out about tawnry, why doesn't he travel there instead of following sleet to a wholly different town? it just doesn't make sense IMO.

anyway, interesting way to introduce a new character. that mercenary has a stick up his ass. he needs a chill pill. lol. good chapter. i like how sleet has a one-track mind: money food money food. he's pretty dull for a thief. but it makes him all the more likable.

Yay! A chapter! Yes, it's rather fast-paced, but it's still great. =3 Tungsten sounds cute. I'm liking him already. lol X3 I almost can't wait for the next chapter but I will, anyway, because you're just that great an author. ^w^ *hugs*

i actually clicked 'next' and wasn't going to review, then saw you comment on thanking one 'lone reviewer' and then i felt bad, and then i checked how many reviews you had, and i felt even more guilty, so now i'm here writing a review for chapter one because it does deserve comment, after all.

so yeah.

GREAT descriptions! I was actually surprised you didn't have a lot of reviews. it probably has to do with the length of the chapters (don't get me wrong, I LOVE long chapters!!!); i suspect those adolescent aged reviewers prowling the site don't take too well to that. Anyway, interesting story you've got going on here. The characterizations are great and you've got me curious about this eye trinket. The dialogue also flows well and the logic of some things isn't too confusing for people to handle. I was actually really glad that the first chapter didn't turn out to be a: thief pick pockets, gets caught, falls in love with captor, etc scenario. Most thief stories turn out like that...

But yeah, great overall first chapter! I'm liking it. I'll be reading the rest when i can.

wooo!!! sex!!!

ch 3: i like how sleet's so deep in the closet, given that the timeline/setting for a 'in the close' gay problem theme doesn't exactly fit in this story. but it's still cute. and this is an alternate universe. so who cares? again, cool descriptions.