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Eeeeeeeeee~! XD Update, update, yay! ^//w//^

....... Honestly, I don't really have a lot to say about this chapter. The action was well written, as it always is. But Sleet's being a little childish. He's come close to dying how many times, now? At this rate, one more small-scale attack is going to kill him. *worries* Still, Erebus could stand to be a little less.... Erebus, if you know what I mean. XP The two of them could at least try to get along. But, I know that's knot going to happen. lol X3

I'm definitely staying tuned. ^w^ See you next time! =D *hugs*

Hi.

I understand you wish to draw out the content. But having the repetitive plot of Sleet simply saying no cause "he didnt have a choice" really does get tiring and annoying after nearly half the story. Being stubborn is one thing, but too stubborn and it becomes really stupid. It seems that he still hasn't learnt anything and doesn't wish to learn. And it just gets really frustrating to read.

Still, after glancing through the latest two chapters of Hourglass, I must say it's almost the same as the previous 2 chapters. I really want to read this story, it has incredible potential, but with each chapter nearly mirroring each other, it doesn't make a very enjoyable read, especially if the same frustrating topics are brought up time and time again.

For the past few chapters, it was been going somewhat like, sleet gets in trouble -> denies voice in head -> rejects his "destiny" -> blindly stands by what he believes in despite frost murdering someone in front of him -> voice in head saves him -> asks voice in head to shut up -> wont accept "destiny". Yes. we know he's stubborn, he doesn't want to 'bow to destiny', but when hasn't he already been faced by numerous life and death situations, and he even has some blood on his hands, yet he still won't budge, it just seems a little farfetched.

I really would like to read this and see how this develops, I really liked it at the beginning and I do hope to see it a chapter with Sleet not being another whiny main character lead for once. ^^

Awesome! I'm starting tohave a crush on Raven. Moody dudes with eye-patches are made of WIN.

I am so loving this story right now. I feel like i am reading a real published novel from the someone like Lynn Flewelling and that is definately a compliment!

I cannot wait until you update again. This story is pure gold.

*Adds to my recommended list*

Eeee hee hee heeee~! XD Hourglass... At last, it begins! ^//////^ *hops around*

And what a great start it is. Something's going to happen, isn't there? Something big. 83 Of course, I know my question won't be answered until you're ready to reveal it, but I'm just letting you know the anticipation's there. lol X3

Oh, yeah. There's one bit where I think there were supposed to be italices, but there aren't. It's while they're still riding into town and starts when (I think it was) Erebus says "at least she has a lick of sense," or something like that, and continues until Raven calls out to Alaris. I don't think it's a big deal, but I don't know if you want to fix it or not. X3 *hugs*

See you next time, Draco-san! =D

There's just something about the thought that someone's eyes will only be on you, isn't there? All the better if they're a one-of-a-kind color. X3 lol

A very nice tid-bit until Hourglass is posted. ^w^ *nomnom* It's interesting to get into Frost's head, but just a little creepy, too. X3 Just a little.

Eeee~! XD *does the happy fanfic dance* I almost can't wait! But I will because I love your work when it's not rushed. ^w^ *hugs*

See you next time! =D

You haven't written one bit of Hourglass, yet? =O Well, get to it! DX

*slaps chains on her inner rabid fangirl* Sorry, she got away from me. ^w^;; What I meant to say was; OMG O___O Poor Sybaris and her other. ;_____; We'll never know who he was, now. TT__TT Hopefully Erebus and Sleet can learn to cooperate long enough to help the others.

*sigh* Even in the depths of possession, Frost still comments on the beauty of Sleet's eyes. -___-;; I'm not sure if I should swoon like a hopeless romantic or not. lol X3

I don't care if that fanfic is belated. Knowing that you're working on it at all is a great present in and of itself. ^//w//^ *hugs Draco-san*

You've read Strangers in the night? =D Squee! XD Now I'm really looking forward to my birthday! X3 My family's small, so it's really hard to get a surprise on the big day. ^w^

Anyway, that last round with Frost was almost sweet. He really did let Sleet get away with things he wouldn't have before, like he was making it up to him, or something. Meh, could be just me, but it was still steamy and hot all the same. lol X3

And don't worry about being busy, I'm busy myself. XP Work has a way of standing between you and your writing, a process I'm very familiar with. It just makes updates that much more special. ;3

Great job as always, Draco-san! ^o^ *hug*

amazing story