rate_review Reviews

I gota say I don't appreciate mingled complicated story lines whither pro or semi-pro, guess because I get confortable with certain characters and want their story to continue to the end, nor do I like stories that keep flipping back and forth.

Just my personal preference, G

I'm really enjoying the story. A well written story that actually flows when I read it, without having to trip over misspellings and bad grammar. My favorite character is Raven. It'd be interesting to read more about his background. I've always liked badass hero types. I personally think after he rescues Sleet, he should take him over his knee and give him a much overdue and deserved spanking. :)

Yes I'm really glad that the next update won't be a cliffhanger! I hate those but I love them at the same time! Dammit I don't know what Balaam wants now! And shame on you Frost! for letting Balaam control you! I thought you were stronger than that!!! T___T I'm really happy that your updates are really fast nowadays <3 and I like where this story is going (as always) whahah, I actually thought that Balaam was hurting Tungsten when he said that he had left a gift for Sleet..damn! XD Noooo! where is Adair!! I want Adair! I like the twins and they should be together forever! anywas please update soon! and thank you for these fast updates nowadays!

Chapter 23. OOOOOOO You left me hanging! -pokes insistently- update, update!

Njaaaaoooooow that one was really mean!
There will be lots more cliffhangers? makes me want to stop reading and wait for 3 chapters and then read itXD
but I can't! I love this story so much and you updated it so fast! It still is my favorite story! thank you very much!
And I loved this chapter! Sleet will finally grow some balls ~ yes, I can't wait! As always loved the update, love where this is going! and can't wait for the next chapter! Good luck with your life and hope you will be doing fine and update soon pleaase :3 Exam week (kinda) is finally over, 2 more weeks and then vacation and I hope you'll have an update of one of your stories! YOU OWN BTWXD

you know...i was reading the first chapter...and i sort of went: did i read this before?

then i read the second chapter, then the third, then the fourth, and i went: did i read this before?

then it wasn't until i saw you reply in an author's note to me that it hit me that i had started reading this story before...two years ago (when i checked the review date)!!!!!

my oh myyyy it's been such a long time!!!

i've powered through all the chapters recently and i LOVE what's happened!! i was so happy to find such a well-written and fascinating story to read with such lengthy chapters and suspense in each one. i can't believe i ever forgot about this story, though i'm a bit glad to have found it when there were so many chapters to read. XD

yes. i'm a spoiled reader. i secretly love finding good stories that already have a hefty amount of chapters to them so i can read through all that has happened without waiting. now i'm stuck that the cliffhanger you have left us at, burning in my mind to know what happens next. XD

i love what you've done and how far the characters in the story have gotten. this story is ammaaazzzing and will be in my bookmarker for forever. ;)

sleet is so oblivious to his feelings. lol. he's a thief who hasn't noticed that his heart has been stolen. or maybe it's the opposite way around, with frost. ^_^ they need to stop torturing one another and make sweet open love all day long.

anyway i really liked that one chapter you inserted in there, the short one from frost's POV. it really made some things clearer though it seemed a bit awkward to have in the story. but it really explained a lot and really convinces me why he acts the way he does to sleet and his ambitions (sort of). seeing things through the mind of the villain is always a treat.

great job!! i really like this story and will be keeping all eyes peeled for any future updates for now on. i can't believe i ever forgot about it. *hits self*

this story is really precious.

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..... Update. Please, update. ;____; *wants more*

This first chapter is completely engaging. I haven't read any of your other stories but if this is indicative of what you write, count me a fan. Bravo!

I was liking Frost a lot, but now he seems a bit sinister...

Bravo!

I have a bad feeling, but I really like Frost and Sleet. Together! LOL Obviously, this is already written, but I'm afraid to read the next part... :))