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This is a really good story, I hope you will continue with it! :-D

WOW I was starting to wonder... Last time I checked it said you updated but it was the Tugsten, so when I checked this past time I was thrilled to see two new ones! OH my goodness is Beryl really that hung up on his leader that he's just going to do as the demon wants? Poor Sleet that kid just can't catch a break... I do how ever wonder what could have happened to make Sleet the way he is? I mean his parents are like the salt of the Earth so to speak I wonder what they would think of his life style now? Does Sleet have a split personality even with out E being inside his head? I'm still wondering how he's going to help Frost and the demon and does Frost REALLY love sleet or is it just a passing fancy? Poor Mal I REALLY feel for that kid! I hope he'll be able to see his family again and give what's his name his come-up-in's.... Thank YOU for updating!

Amazing, keep up the good work :)

wow that was just wow I love how you're giving the perspective of the group, will you do the same for Frost? Will we find out how he came to be what his now??

This is so amazing and I desprately hope you update it soon as I am dying yo know whats next

I wonder if Balaam has ever known/felt things like love.

Thanks for the updates!! Awesome story

This story is amazing! Love all the twists and turns. I have a question about the last chapter, it says at the end TBC in "interlude", is that a title to a new story we should keep an eye for?

STILL TOTALLY LOVING THIS STORY! The way you write you can almost taste and feel the walls and roof caving in and all the dust that is floating around. Sucks if you're claustrophobic! I can't wait till the next exciting chapter!!! I wonder if Raven will say thank you to Sleet??? R they going to hook up??? I know I know I know I gotta read and find out! Well then read ya laters!

This story is in my A+ list.
You write really really well. So I wanted to show my support and leave a comment to let you know how I eagerly wait for a new chapter. Thanks for sharing!

WELL HOLY COW BAT MAN HAVE WE GOT A WINNER HERE! I've just spent the last two days reading up to this point and DAMN it has just been one awesome ride! I'm kinda hoping that Raven and Sleet pair up. I have a feeling that Frost might not make it... I too am wondering what it is about Sleet that has Frost so hell bent on saving him or killing him? The color of Sleet eyes... Anywho I'm glad I finally got to read this story and OH HELL'S I JUST REMEMBERED IF ROCK IS FALLING WHERE THE FREE GROUP IS WHAT THE HELL'S HAPPENING WITH SLEET AND RAVEN TRAPED IN THEIR CELLS????? I know I know I'll just have to keep my panties on and read in the next exciting chapter that will come soon! read ya laters!