rate_review Reviews

Great start! It definitely caught my interest and your style flows very nicely. Keep it up! I'll be looking forward to chapter 2. ^^

Fantasy, one of my favorite genre. The story started very interesting. You were very descriptive and displayed imagery throughout most of the beginning; while I was reading, I able to picture the entire story. Very unique. I could tell that immediately from reading your first chapter. Update soon. I'll be looking for ya.

A loyal, eager follower
.:lindsey:.