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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heh, the latest chapter was hilarios. Seeing Thom in drag really made me laugh and Savyn is rally evil in good way. Trying to kill 3 birds at the same time. I wonder what will be Nathan's reaction if or when he sees Thom.
More, please.
More, please.
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You update faster then I can read, what happened to your break?
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhh suspense! Yay!
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like theme of your story. There's so many interesting characters and so much that could happen. It's a enjoyable story and I find Thom's bickering amusing. The sparks between Nathan and Thom is speaking for a mutual attractons. I like it. I wonder what's going to happen the next? and when they are going to tell the truth.
I would love to read more. Keep up with good work.
^__^
I would love to read more. Keep up with good work.
^__^
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I often go offtrack myself, too. It's just...one of those things which you can't avoid
xD
Oh, don't worry, I'm not getting bored. A slow start always leads to a well-developed story ;)
xD
Oh, don't worry, I'm not getting bored. A slow start always leads to a well-developed story ;)
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about the story starting slow.
Go take a break if you need it^^
Go take a break if you need it^^
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha, don't worry about some of the grammar mistakes, they weren't all bad, trust me. I know, sometimes its hard to find mistakes when you're writing it yourself ^^;;
Anyways, I cant wait to see what happens next!
Anyways, I cant wait to see what happens next!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, you update fast! Good work^^
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love your story! The writing is great, though there are a few grammatical mistakes here and there, but don't worry too much about it.^^
Anyways, I love this idea, that a bookworm who is in love with Fantasy books and the likes finds out that they are real! Its like a dream come true, haha.
Keep on writing!
Anyways, I love this idea, that a bookworm who is in love with Fantasy books and the likes finds out that they are real! Its like a dream come true, haha.
Keep on writing!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I think its a bit too early for Thom and Nathan. I suggest you wait for a few more chapters.
Anyhow, I think your character Thom needs more development, just a bit though, since its hard to understand him. But I do get what kind of attitude he gives off.
Oh, yes, I like your story, keep on writing! ^__^
Anyhow, I think your character Thom needs more development, just a bit though, since its hard to understand him. But I do get what kind of attitude he gives off.
Oh, yes, I like your story, keep on writing! ^__^