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for The Five Realms

by vhsster

person Catmum56
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! I just discovered this one a week ago. It took me a while to read through it, but I love it. Thom is a wonderful character, and I especially like the building relationship between him and Nathan. I'm a yaoi fan, what can I say? The supporting cast is quirky and interesting, and I look forward to the rest of the story.
person HannaFO
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor kid... Must be hard to suddenly get all that info about himself and his real family... great chappie
person nancy
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you've gotten me hooked? please feed me need!
person Chemarim
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew he was the librarian xD
person HannaFO
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha funy chapter :D He's taking things pretty cool i must say :D Thanks for the update!!
person HannaFO
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story :D interesting and captivating... i can't wait for next chapter :D:D
person Zelasii
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again, more quick updates!
Anyways, I kinda want to know more about Nathan's heritage, the Dragon race. Or will we learn about that more later on?
Keep writing, I love it so far!
person Elken
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thom is so unsure of himself and somehow still so lonely. I hope Nathan can assure Thom that he's not alone and his beatiful in his own way. I guess lies and untold truths are showing their effect.

I want more ^__^
person KTS
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now I reviewed your story on both sites! Once again I love this story and hope that you update it soon.
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chp. 15- he kissed him and just left wat the hell, wat the hell?