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Holy snitzel!
I leave my borderline-obsessive-stalking for like two days, and what do I find? Two updates! The happiness! I would cry with joy...but I can't cry and read at the same time :p
Oooh, so whats out in the woods waiting to eat Anne now? And is it in a bad way or a good way? xP
Hopefully this *ahem* fast updating will continue.
Otherwise...I might have to actually do something productive with my time...and we wouldn't want that now would we?
*anxiously awaiting the next installment*
$MS$

*twiddles thumbs and waits for 'soon' to arrive*
So...when is this 'soon' that you will be updating going to arrive?
'Cause ya know, some of us have just recently found this story and are now obsessively checking for updates every two hours, and yet not finding any...
It makes some of us very sad...
So you should *ahem* update this rather marvelous story. And if it helps, some of us are quite willing to inflate your ego with well deserved compliments such as 'This story is awesome,' and 'I really love your writing style, it flows so well and you have a really nice way of wording everything,'. :)
So update soon ne? Because some of us are obviously slightly insane [in a good way]. And there's nothing worse than a slightly insane story-stalker ;)
$MS$

Hubba hubba baby! XDD that was... rather appetizing.. I'll defiantly have those images plastered in my brain tonight ;P... I give it a two thumbs up, good job DracoQueen XD...

O.O... wow, what a cliffhanger THAT one was.... O.O;;

I... don't think theres... much else to say except... can't.. wait for other... installment... O.O;;

Wow, that was a really powerful chapter. O.O... I sometimes underestimate the power of words and imagination.. This chapter is making me very impatient for the next one to come out ^-^.


anyways, you wanted my e-mail addressee.. It's BannanaFLVR@yahoo.com I can't wait to get the full description of the chraracters ^-^.. I need to get my scanner working though. Lol

OMG!
You HAVE to update soon! This is truly brilliant!
You've got me hooked.
Please keep posting!
S
p.s Vincent is SO hot! ;P lol

Wow, this chapter has pure emotion oozing from it's virtual pages.. I L.O.V.E.D it. :)

And as for the art portion of your request, I'm somewhat of an artist, although I only have 18 years of experience. I would love to make you pieces of artwork.. But I can't promise much, before I make it official, I have to get my scanner up and running. I'm sorry if I can't help you directly, but I would absolutely enjoy making fan-art for you.
If you don't mind that is of coarse, would it be alright if you sent descriptions of each character through an e-mail to my yahoo address? I know I could be intelligent and read through the chapters for better pointers, but I'm a lazy, bloody git. But if you can't or simply don't want to go through the trouble of e-mailing an extensive amount of information, I will harbor no ill-feelings toward you. :)

Hopefully I can be more helpful to you in the near future.


Respectfully your fan,
~~~~~~ ATBliss

I cannot begin to express my deep infatuation with your typed story. You cross the line of reality and fantasy, and you do it so well. One of lesser intelligence would probably not even be able to comprehend this advanced form of literature. Your story somewhat reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe. Even though it's pure fiction the reading (including myself) somehow cannot fall in love with the characters. Anne, many of us younger females can relate to her in some way, shape or form. The day-dream, adventure seeker, the one wishing for something more then just a petty, sad excuse for a life. Ryou, so warm and caring, so quick to protect the stranded female. Even Vincent can be commendable at times. He's strong, silent, but has a deeply emotional personality that's just barely bubbling underneath the surface.

I've never expected to become so engrossed by this. Your use of words and analogies is simply spectacular. I wish I had at least a pinch of your talent. And it saddened and surprised me to see that you have only one rating, and three reviews.. Your story deserves so much more. But I digress.

And oh my god, I absolutely loved chapter 5. I wanted Anne to just turn around and sock Vincent in the face before disappearing behind the temple doors. I'm sure he has his reasons for being so cold toward Anne's situation, but jees, what a jerk :(. And I hope the Archbishop doesn't rape Anne, that would be so disgusting and disturbing... XP
But anyways... keep up the FANTASTIC work. You know I'll be reading this every step of the way.

Respectfully yours,
~~~~~~ATBliss

*patiently stalks you untill you get the next chapter out (almost in a Vincent type way)*

:P

*Swoon* I promise... I'll cry if I dont get to know what happens next! This story is like an advent calander you know behind all the little doors there are bits of delicious goodness. But you only get it by being patient! Your doing wonderfly. The players are beautifully realised and each has a distinct personality not exactly fitting only the authoress and maybe her friends but people who really would have lived these lives in these times and places! They are real and not just on paper but in my mind and heart now as well and have been since the end of chapter two. You never fail to get me guessing. At first I just thought... Delusions of a Coma... That was shot down. But then it made me think again of an idea my husband and I address being avid paper and pencil RPG fans... When we create a world in our minds to a point where we disagree with the players or miss them when the game is done or just KNOW that was so something that would have made them laugh just as if they had been old friends... are these players real in some version of infinate dimensions that are created by mere thought... and is there any way to get there?