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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there faithful reader! I've got to say, that YES! YES YES YES! You succeeded! That was so very, very hot! I don't read a lot of stuff out there, and hardly ever review because I am pretty busy with my own stories, but I thought about how punctual you are about reading and reviewing "Noble Blood" and "Maid to Lust" and I thought I'd take a look at what you had up.
AND OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOODNESS! I love your characters. I've read the real life smutties and they usually come off forced and a little dramatic and fake, but yours was exquisite. You built up a good history between the two. The sex was dynamic and hardly cheesy! Their dialouge was good, and I can't help but think maybe you know your stuff about alcohol *wink, wink*.
The only thing I might have suggested improvement upon is...what do they look like? Maybe you did a great job with that too and I'm just anal; but I loved your characters so much, I was wishing that I could understand their physical appearances more!
So there *sticks tongue out* we are mutual fans of each other! Love your smexy stuffs!
AND OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOODNESS! I love your characters. I've read the real life smutties and they usually come off forced and a little dramatic and fake, but yours was exquisite. You built up a good history between the two. The sex was dynamic and hardly cheesy! Their dialouge was good, and I can't help but think maybe you know your stuff about alcohol *wink, wink*.
The only thing I might have suggested improvement upon is...what do they look like? Maybe you did a great job with that too and I'm just anal; but I loved your characters so much, I was wishing that I could understand their physical appearances more!
So there *sticks tongue out* we are mutual fans of each other! Love your smexy stuffs!
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly one hundred percent continue this. >.< I loved it. Fantastic.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! I would like to see more of it..