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for Factory Girl

by kateridemonica

person ree
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was really good! hope to check out more work from you!
person Shyao
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't even realize it was a song fic. I've seen other song fics and most of those usually break the story between lines and have a lot of the versus. I assumed each section was just her main description of the guy. Though it was a nice story I felt a little lost at the start. I mean how did she end up this way and why? Why does her master trust that these men will bring her back? But otherwise it was an excellent story!