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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Is it bad that this actually kind of made me laugh? I am so sick... Anyway, it was really good! I liked the introduction to the characters, we get the feeling that Tommy does really feel like an outsider in his family. I also liked how even though Davie acts all repulsed, he still goes along with and gives him he what he wants. Very hot, even though it's a little disturbing ;)
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't know why- perhaps because it wasn't all that graphic?- but this was very, strangely realistic. i think it was the sense of slight horror? i have no idea. however, i do have to say that this was one of the best incest related fics i have ever read and i think it is because you so perfectly portrayed that slight confusion of 'what-just-happened?'
great job.
great job.
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Second chapter was just as yummy as the first. Wonderful story. I look forward to your next project.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very yummy. Love the spanking and the bondage.