rate_review Reviews

oh my god! that was so sweet! but such an unconventional proposal... lol

i would definitely love more about them! i hate when a story ends and i can't find anything more to read about them anymore...saddening...

i hope to read an epilogue and/or ficlet/drabble about them soon!

ASOTA :)

Oooh, I was hoping that you were going to go there! I love this story so much, thank you for writing it!

A perfectly wonderful ending, to a perfectly wonderful story! I love how you had Niles tied up so that he couldn't run away!! I love the thought of them as married, sharing everything with each other. One of your best chapters yet!

Question for you. Do you see yourself finishing Thirteen? I would really like more of that very interesting story. You had such a great start!

Anyway, thanks so much for this delicious story!!!

Oh dear God. You have taken me on an unforgettable journey, and really, the ending was fantastic. Niles and Rylan were epic, and this story has touched me more than you can imagine. Niles reminds me so much of myself, and through this, I've learned quite a lot. Thank-you for everything that you have written with this phenomenal talent of yours. Of course, my fangirly heart begs for an epilogue - of their wedding? Their first house together? Ten years in the future? Niles describing to their adopted Chinese daughter how Rylan proposed? (I'm Chinese, and I found that part hysterically funny). Either way, thank-you. I've read this story at least five times before it was completed, but now that it is, it only makes me want to revisit it even more. <3

>_< >_< ^_^ Oh my, oh my! I'm so glad you finally got it sorta kinda almost probably done!!! Really I am. Your story is amazing and I love the way your writing turns out. I'm so envious of you it's not even funny. I hope you keep on writing, even if it's not online, because you're very good at it. I'll tell you though, I was not expecting marriage to turn up. But that's what keeps your writing and stories so amazing! The suspense and surprise! You are simply amazing!

man, i love Kya. she's such a little trooper.

Totally sweet ending for two totally sweet guys!!!!

Thank you!!
R

it was great! and i would definately want you to write more about them!

Wow. This was so touching. And powerful. And true. And to follow on such a hot frackin sex scene! Thanks for the crack :-)

Ending? Awesome. Epilogue? Hells yes! You? Are my fuckin' hero.

It was sweet, touching and real. I loved how Ry knew to tie Niles up before hand, and... just how well they both know each other. And how... perfect, yet flawed, their love is. It was so real and sweet I wanted to cry! I want to see their friends' reaction to them getting married, I think that would be awesome - and Tilla and Kaia's reactions. Oh, and more hawt sex. Yes. Deffinitly yes.

Thank you so much for writing this, and I will totally be lurking your page for more. :D