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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I hope you continue it. I've read your A Stage and a Bus about ten times, and I like all of your work, but I think that this has the potential of topping A Stage and a Bus as my favorite. Thanks!
schedule
March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! If this was a one shot, it was terrific!!
They have a VERY interesting relationship! HA!!
Thanks,
R
They have a VERY interesting relationship! HA!!
Thanks,
R
schedule
March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as much as i love your other stories, you can't just leave this one with just one chapter, lol :). i want to know what happens next! :).
schedule
March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow they sure have a cute fucked up relationship!!! sounds like me and my x!!! Good job on this one.
Asyen
Asyen
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think, and am being honest, that this is the best story you've written here.
It's unique and funny. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but that won't kill anyone.
But in short: awesome job. You're getting better and better with your work.
It's unique and funny. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but that won't kill anyone.
But in short: awesome job. You're getting better and better with your work.
schedule
March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm, if this is a one-shot, it's awesome. If it's going to have at least another chapter, great.
But to be honest, I'm tired of the "WHY DONT YOU LOVE ME" -- "IM NOT CAPABLE OF LOVE" -- "I WILL CONVINCE U!" -- "OMG I LOVE U SOOO MUCH LSKFJLDFKJDLFKJSLDFJKSFDSFDLKJdfli3wu4lkjdsfl" stuff. Who isn't?
So this is refreshing. :]
Camui liked.
♥.~
But to be honest, I'm tired of the "WHY DONT YOU LOVE ME" -- "IM NOT CAPABLE OF LOVE" -- "I WILL CONVINCE U!" -- "OMG I LOVE U SOOO MUCH LSKFJLDFKJDLFKJSLDFJKSFDSFDLKJdfli3wu4lkjdsfl" stuff. Who isn't?
So this is refreshing. :]
Camui liked.
♥.~
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that was fantastic!
schedule
March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is very interesting
(and very sexy, but thats almost too obvious to mention)
i really want to know what's going to happen,
i want to see how their relationship works out
so please write more
(and very sexy, but thats almost too obvious to mention)
i really want to know what's going to happen,
i want to see how their relationship works out
so please write more