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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Got some more of that angst in this chapter. Makes things a lot interesting, as I'm sure we all want answers just as much as him.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really taking shape. I don't know what to think of them anymore... Was Rylan trying to provoke him or just being a jerk for the sake of it? And the sex was...dangerous. Please keep it up.
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have such a flare for writing. You make me love your characters. I don't know how I didn't realize this story had been posted, but I'm happy I did. Keep up the excellent work.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was trying to figure out exactly what hooked me about a page down the first chapter, and I've decided it's how well you get Niles across. It's ridiculously difficult to find a story on AFF (or, you know, anywhere) with a character as multi-dimensional as Niles, and with an author who can tell their story. If only for Rylan and his lover-boy, I hope you continue this little ditty. <3
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Oh my god, I love it, because it's well written, sexy and oh so realistic. Good job, and keep writing!
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story so much :D and i hope you'll update soon.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a guilty pleasure story... I love every inch of it, and quite carnally.
The title always gets the song 'It's Like That' by Run-DMC stuck in my head. Which is classic so that's okay.
The title always gets the song 'It's Like That' by Run-DMC stuck in my head. Which is classic so that's okay.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I demand you finish this and have him fix it (his unhealthy obsession)
I wonder how ryan feels about it
I wonder how ryan feels about it
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story! i don't like the idea of rylan just leaving niles all the time... and i feel like he's just using him for his needs... i wouldn't mind switching perspective, but that wouldn't go with the first-person POV... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA
ASOTA
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It's very angsty but I associate with it a lot. Not just my relationship which confuses the hell out of me sometimes but life in general.