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I hope you think a lot more about this story! I love your characters, so fucked up and normal at the same time! I'm so afraid for them, I pray they'll make it, but everything seems so complicated... I even understand this not talking thing, I understand it absolutely. In this context something like "Just kidding" can mean so much and I love to think about it... Wow, such a great story!

This story is so good, it drives me absolutely crazy. I love it. Keep up the great work! (And damn, you update FAST!)

8< This is REALLY unlike any style of story I have read. and I.love.it (B

Niles is so awesome because he doesn't have major emolike insecurities(Not that I don't like stories with suicidal or insecure people ;D). But then again he has a...fuck buddy...who is a laid back guy that makes everyone believe that their situation is normal :D I can really see the PMSing girl in Niles, and then again I can see the there's-no-reason-to-give-a-fuck guy in him too (you can call it the emotionally deprived girl also xD). So many things I want to get out of my mind to say about this story but all I can say right now is that it's GREAT

NNNN!!! too much suspence!!
thats like two things at once!!!
can you do that?!!!
i hope rylan and niles get back together with lots of make up sex
cuz maybe rylan got mad at the condom thing cuz he hasnt slept with anyone else and assumed it meant that niles did and that they really are in a monogomous relationship, yeah?
anyways, brilliantly written as always i can barely wait for more

I just found this story last night and I fell in love with it haha and you updated the next day! You are such a good writer, and I can't wait to see whats wrong with Rylan. Poor Niles :(

it's the first time i'm leaving a review but i couldn't keep quiet anymore.
girl, i love what you write, every single story of yours. this one, of course, too. i love your style and the way you narrate and how real and believable your characters are and behave.
reading this story is really refreshing. and a pure pleasure. even if the relationship presented is a bit unusual and maybe even slightly disfunctiional it's damn interesting. you don't need to resort to cliches to push the story... it's more like your stories fly even if there are some.
now to the story itself :P
rylan confuses me, though i have my little theory about him (probably all wrong but still). niels is deliciously confused and afraid of loosing what he has. shona is the a-bit-bitchy best girl-friend. and all this in the yummy sauce of your writing style. it's a bit hard to say anything about the plot 'cause we saw too little of it yet. but the story setting lets us believe it will be just right. but then it's not the plot itself that's the most important thing in your stories (not that they are PWP stories, far from it!!). it's the dynamics between characters you are allowing us to see practically firsthand (first person narration).
um, so, to sum up all the blabbering above - i love this story, i love you for writing it and i will be waiting (more or less :P) patiently for more.
and i will be a better girl from now on and will be leaving reviews ^^=
ps. "douche" makes me think of showering too XD though it's learning german not french that did it to me :P

I don't know what to say, because I'm German and not so good with English, but this is one of the most amazing stories I ever read. Really, I just love it! These characters are so unique and crazy and loveable - it's incredibly funny and hot! And still it breaks my heart, because the feelings seem so damn real. Thanks a lot!

Wow, this story is EPIC! I can't wait to read more.

wow!! why did he try to sufficate him?? i know that it made him cum harder, but seriously! he could have died!
ASOTA

Ah, this story's awesomeness is increasing exponentially. I'm a history major and I just used a math term, that's how awesome it is. Thank you.