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for It's Like This

by orbitingjupiter

schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
0_0 Its just SO MUCH, to take in one chapter and yet...I love it a lot! I love the way that you wrote it too...how that Niles is repenting for 19 years of happiness but technically it's his darling sister ]: SUCKS! but also rocks my imagination. I dunno, I'm really contradicting myself but I really DO LOVE THIS SO MUCH BD Thanks for writing!

ps-you're giving me anxiety here! I totally can't believe Rylan's coming x3
person Sekre
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoooa, Rylan took that way bad .. and Kya's eye sounds pretty serious.
person Elizabeth
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, please tell me that there will be some hard core cuddling now. I read this instead of studying for a test too, coincidence, or great writing?
person **
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im hookd! i love it! keep checking everyday for updates... cant wait to see what happens!
person kashka
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
powerful...
i was almost as nervous from just reading as niels was this whole time.
rylan got angry. but something like this was to be expected. the total lack of communication was bound to mess things up. they are kinda cute together though, in a fuc*ed up way, so i am rooting for them :]

and thanks for such a quick update!
though now thanks to the cliffhanger at the end i will be very IMpatiently waiting for more XD
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O__O wwhoaa!


is all i'm going to say and that i can't wait for the next chapter!
person sparrow9
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow thats all I can say man the emotion you put into this with so little words is amazing. I can't wait to see were you go with this.
person Rosei
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

OMG!! Did Rylan think that Niles was sleeping with other people?!!
Wow!! What's going on in Rylan's head?!! If actions speak louder than
words (And, I believe they do!), then Rylan is soooooo in love with Niles, and...
OMG!!! That condom was a complete disater!!!! Never listen to your friends!!!! HA!

Great chapter! Love these two guys!! They need to say a few things to each other...right?!
Anything other than "Get out!"

Thanks,
R
person kashka
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROTFL! i mean the "i have a difficult exam ahead of me so i have to do thousands of things instead of learning". are we related?
btw, i love you for updating so fast :]

it kinda sucks that the thing distracting niels from his... break-up (?) with raylan is his little sister possibly going blind :(
i'm still keeping my fingers crossed for the boys.
btw, i love matilda XD she's one cool younger sister :]
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! rylan is out of his MIND!!! he almost kills niles then gets extremely mad at him for having a condom!!! ...uh oh! i see the men in white! gotta go!!!
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